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Book Review: Waking the Dragon, by Juliette Cross

I am not 100% sure, but I believe I bought my copy of Juliette CrossWaking the Dragon during an online author signing event.

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The Gladium Province is on the verge of civil unrest as humans and Morgons, the dragon-hybrid race, clash once more. But amid disorder can also arise passion.

When the bodies of three human women are discovered in Morgon territory—with the DNA of several Morgon men on the victims—it’s just a matter of time before civil unrest hits the Province. But for ambitious reporter Moira Cade, it’s more than just a story, and it may mean risking her own life.

Descending into the dark underworld of Morgon society, Moira is paired with Kol Moonring, Captain of the Morgon Guard, for her protection. Fiercely independent, Moira bristles at his dominance, and defies his will at every turn. Yet resistance proves futile when passion flares between them, awakening powerful emotions within both, body and soul. But as the killings continue, can their fiery newfound bond survive an even greater evil-one that threatens all of humanity, Morgonkind, and Moira’s very soul?…

my review

Honestly, I wanted to like this a lot more than I did. I liked the idea of it, but there were just so many ways the author took an idea I liked in a direction that I didn’t like, that in the end, I finished the book feeling dissatisfied. But before I get into a litany of things I did not like, I’ll say the writing is fine. The book is perfectly readable. Most of this comes down to personal preference.

First, the female main character is an early twenties university student. She’s the editor of the SCHOOL NEWSPAPER, and for this newspaper, she is investigating a triple (plus) murder. Nothing in that works for me. The gravitas of basically going undercover to catch a murderer “for the story” does not match the abilities or expectations of a university journalism student. Honestly, everything about this would have worked better if Moira had been older and had been working a real job in which she was experienced and vested.

Second, this book is steeped in rape. There is no actual rape on-page, thank goodness. But the whole plot is about rape in a way that permieates every page. It just wasn’t necessary. I’m not talking trigger warnings or anything, because, again, no on-page rape. But I call such use of rape as a plot device the lowest of low hanging plot fruit. Which, to my mind, makes it LAZY PLOTTING. There are a million more interesting ways to put a female character in a position to depend on her male romantic lead.

Third, I don’t think the book would pass the Bechtel test. And if it does, it’s slimly. But more importantly, every woman who isn’t being set up to be a dragon mate eventually is vapid and unpleasant in all the ways women are so often poorly represented. There is no depth to them. This is the patriarchy’s version of women and borders on misogyny in its repetition (especially in books written for and by women).

Fourth, I don’t know Cross’s religious position, but I’d guess she is either a fundamentalist Christian, has internalized their worldview, or is writing to that market. Because this book is everything fundamentalists want represented in a relationship. You’ve got all the male headship (fathers, brothers, bosses, husbands, brother-in-laws) but no women in authority. These men have all the power in every situation in the book, especially in the home, and all the women give deference to them. (Gracious submission, anyone?) Just about the most important decision a woman makes is the dinner menu (and she gets it wrong). The romance here is pretty much just Moira accepting Kol’s headship.

Now, I don’t read paranormal romance for the feminist takes, and can usually turn off my tendency to look at things through the critical lens of feminism. But this book is especially explicit in its anti-feminist leanings. Cross literally constructs Moira’s “feminist ideals”, “female stubbornness”, career dreams, etc, as a foil and impediment to a relationship. She has to choose. The reader is literally asked to consider (as Moira asks herself) if she hasn’t used her feminism to build a wall between herself and the possibility of love. Then, Moira states she doesn’t want her dream (career, independence, feminism, etc) anymore; Kol is the dream now. This is not a book that happens to fail a critical feminist critique. (So much of the romance genre does, and I still manage to enjoy it, even if I acknowledge it.) This is an anti-feminist book disguised as romance…or using romance to perpetuate its anti-feminist (maybe fundamentalist) agenda. That’s a big difference. And if the author didn’t do it on purpose, there are definite questions to be asked.

Fifth, the fact that the super-advanced human and Morgan law enforcement agencies (two of waking the dragon photothem) had to depend on an early 20s journalism student to solve the case is ridiculous in general. But I’d go along with it for the plot, except that they literally had all the information to solve the case without her involvement. Literally, the only way they could have not solved the case with the information they already had was to have not opened a case at all.

I could go on, but I don’t want to get more nit-picky than I am already being. This didn’t work for me for a myriad of reasons. But I’ll acknowledge that most of them are personal preferences, so experiences may vary.


Other Reviews:

Review: Waking the Dragon by Juliette Cross

ARC Review: Waking the Dragon (Vale of Stars #1) by Juliette Cross

 

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Book Review: The Witchslayer, by Opal Reyne

I received a copy of Opal Reyne‘s The WitchSlayer as part of a Renegade Romance book box.

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When Amalia’s cat brought home a strange flying lizard during a terrible storm, she had no idea that it was a Dragon. Or that he would save her from burning at the stake, only to imprison her in his lair when she saw his human face. Now she is stuck in this cave with a moody, hot-tempered, and arrogant warrior – one who has killed her kind by the dozens.

She expected to feel trapped, but he somehow makes her feel unbelievably… safe.

Rurik’s only goal is to kill the Dark Witch, Strolguil the Vast. He never expected to find himself in a White Witch’s home in need of healing, or that she would be completely oblivious about his kind, or her own. He intends to abandon her, a lowly Witch, to her fiery fate, but he can’t ignore his blood-debt after she saves him.

Nor can he ignore the fierce desire that she grows in him when she roams free inside his lair.

However, there are Dark Witches afoot, and Rurik isn’t sure if he can shed years of hatred to trust the enchanting woman he has in his keeping.

my review

Meh. Honestly, I didn’t love this. I didn’t hate it either. I was just kind of bored by it. I liked the FMC, but the MMC didn’t have quite enough growth for me to ever truly like him. I merely found him tolerable. The plot was okay, but the book is far longer than it needs to be, and some of the dialogue clunks. (Too many characters asking things like “bla, bla, bla, is it not?”) I’ve read other Reyne books that I enjoyed more. But this one was a letdown.

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Book Review: Fourth Wing, by Rebecca Yarros

I borrowed a copy of Rebecca YarrosFourth Wing from the library.

fourth wing coverEnter the brutal and elite world of a war college for dragon riders…

Twenty-year-old Violet Sorrengail was supposed to enter the Scribe Quadrant, living a quiet life among books and history. Now, the commanding general—also known as her tough-as-talons mother—has ordered Violet to join the hundreds of candidates striving to become the elite of Navarre: dragon riders.

But when you’re smaller than everyone else and your body is brittle, death is only a heartbeat away…because dragons don’t bond to “fragile” humans. They incinerate them.

With fewer dragons willing to bond than cadets, most would kill Violet to better their own chances of success. The rest would kill her just for being her mother’s daughter—like Xaden Riorson, the most powerful and ruthless wingleader in the Riders Quadrant.

She’ll need every edge her wits can give her just to see the next sunrise.

Yet, with every day that passes, the war outside grows more deadly, the kingdom’s protective wards are failing, and the death toll continues to rise. Even worse, Violet begins to suspect leadership is hiding a terrible secret.

Friends, enemies, lovers. Everyone at Basgiath War College has an agenda—because once you enter, there are only two ways out: graduate or die.

my review

I don’t really understand all the hype about this book. I mean, it’s a fine book. I enjoyed it and will be looking for book two. But other than some disability representation (which I appreciate), there’s not really anything special about it. I actually think it’s a bit tropey. I’ve read many, many books with very similar plotlines, worlds, characters, etc. So, while it’s fine, I don’t understand why people are so very, very ga-ga over it. To each their own, I suppose.

More specifically, I enjoyed the banter between the characters, especially with the dragons. I like the characters themselves. And the world is interesting, if a little ham-fisted. I did struggle to believe that even a school designed to weed out the weak wouldn’t nip a psychopath in the bud. That’s a weakness of a different sort, all by itself. So, that aspect felt contrived. And let’s be honest, it really does stretch credulity that the secret revealed at the end would actually stay a secret. All in all, however, I’m looking forward to continuing the series.

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Other Reviews:

Julia DiGeronimo: Was Fourth Wing worth the hype?

Haley’s Book Have: So, I finally read Fourth Wing by Rebecca Yarros.