Author, shana Vernon, sent me a copy of The Assassin’s Daughter for review.
She’s a deadly assassin…
…but there’s something she doesn’t know.
Will learning the truth cost her everything?
Lenna entered the guild under a secret identity because if they found out who she really was, it could get her killed.
But she had no choice.
She had to find out what happened to her father.
As they each learned about their powers and the world of rogue vampires, the stakes grew. Lenna couldn’t afford any romantic distractions. Cade, her instructor, though, was hard to resist. It wasn’t the first time they had met and if he recognized her, it could be deadly.
She was willing to risk everything…
…but finding her father wouldn’t be easy.
Something was going on at the Guild and she needed to get to the bottom of it. There was only one chance for Lenna to get answers and the odds were against her.
Could she count on her new friends?
This is essentially an academy novel, though I don’t think that’s what the author set out to write. And I think that’s part of why I didn’t get along with this book. It didn’t know what it wanted to be, so it was just too many thing…poorly.
The writing is pedestrian, but readable. I don’t remember any big editing mishaps and the cast is diverse. Plus, the plot seems like it has a kernel of a good idea. That’s about all the nice things I have to say.
The characters are supposed to be in their 20s. Several were in the military and all had finished at least high school. But they literally felt 16…which made the sex feel a bit out of place. Lenna is supposed to be some super trained assassin, but she’s basically useless. She almost dies several times when everyone else barely got scratches. (These injuries felt overblown though.) The whole Maximus angle wasn’t utilized enough to have been included at all. And, worst of all, the plotting was non-existent. Nothing develops or was allowed to entice the reader, things just happened.
She went to find a dangerous, well-guarded vampire and did so within moments. (Though this, at least, is later explained.) She decided to enter the assassin guild and within a day did it. She walked in the door exactly as they were starting a new training class (there was no indication that she did this on purpose) and just joined, la-di-da. The guild just handed out the superpowers the same night, despite not knowing her. She immediately made friends (revealed her closest held secret) and found an insta-love. Lenna twice (TWICE) accidentally stumbled across people discussing secrets for her to overhear and eventually founds her father by accident. There is no nuance or delicacy here.
And on a personal irritant level, two small things especially irked me. As someone who worked with children’s services, the fact that Lenna’s secret identity is supposed to have bounced from foster home to foster home but have been home schooled struck me as ridiculous. That just isn’t possible. It’s unlikely that most states would even allow it and it would be basically impossible to find multiple foster parents who were willing and able to home school. They have too much else on their plate! I realize this is a small thing and it’s a fantasy book. But it was mentioned several times and I called BS every-time, which pulled me out of the narrative.
Then there was the little rich girl character who Lenna disliked and disparaged because she was like “Daddy” this and “Daddy” that. But the whole time Lenna was like “Papa” this and “Papa” that and I was like, “You’re the same, so maybe shut it with your attitude.” I found Lenna really unlikable in such moments.
Oh, and I hated—HATED—the ending! I wasn’t surprised by it, but I still hated it.
All in all, this is an intensely YA novel, even if it’s not meant to be. (YA, not even NA, IMO.) The Amazon blurb calls it an “Adult Urban Supernatural Fantasy,” which is the only reason I accepted it for review, but I can’t see that as true. All in all, I didn’t particularly enjoy it. By 40% I was fighting the urge to skim and by the halfway mark I’d given in and skimmed the rest (which isn’t something I do often). I’d have DNFed it if I hadn’t committed to reviewing it.
But to be fair, the book as plenty of good reviews. So, it could just be a “not right book for me” scenario.
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The Assassin’s Daughter by Shana Vernon