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Book Review: Splintered Loyalty, by W.R. Gingell

I contributed to the Kickstarter for W.R. Gingell‘s Splintered Loyalty and therefore received an early-release e-copy of the book. I’ve reviewed the previous books here: Splintered Mind, Splintered Life, Splintered Sight, and Splintered Path.

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Luca is back. Jasper is shady. The Tea House has returned to its regularly scheduled programming.

But nothing is quite normal for Viv, who knows that someone in the Tea House hacked her phone and stole valuable information about her mother before she had a chance to look at it. Tech Support can help with that—but only so much.

And before Viv has a chance to get to the safe deposit box belonging to her parents that might or might not still be in an old, gothic Melbourne bank, she and the rest of the Tea House denizens are overrun by an invasion of Forex agents taking over the Tea House.

Viv knows she can’t trust Jasper completely. She trusts Luca completely, but knows she shouldn’t. She’ll need all her wits—and allies—about her to save the Tea House and uncover her own family secrets before it’s too late.

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I find reviewing books well into a series difficult. There comes a point where I just want to go, “I’ve made it to book five in this series. I clearly enjoy this world, these characters, and this story. And I’ve likely already explained why in at least one of the previous four reviews.” But it’s true. I’ve enjoyed everything I’ve read by Gingell, and the Shattered World series is no exception. I like her writing style, authorial tone, wit, humor, and characters.

Viv and Luca are marvelous, and both are allowed to grow separately in this book. Though the reader sees more of Viv’s growth than Luca’s. I did miss seeing them work together, but I appreciate that Viv needed a chance to prove her abilities on her own. And she does, saving the day as only she can.

I did feel the writing here was a tad more rushed in some indefinable, perhaps imagined, way. But I still finished the book wishing the next one was already in hand. I’ll be waiting impatiently.

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Book Review: The Raven’s Tale, by Cat Winters

I’ve had a copy of Cat Winter‘s The Raven’s Tale on the shelf for several years now. I suspect I won it, but it’s also possible I picked it up second-hand.

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Seventeen-year-old Edgar Poe counts down the days until he can escape his foster family—the wealthy Allans of Richmond, Virginia. He hungers for his upcoming life as a student at the prestigious new university, almost as much as he longs to marry his beloved Elmira Royster. However, on the brink of his departure, all his plans go awry when a macabre Muse named Lenore appears to him. Muses are frightful creatures that lead Artists down a path of ruin and disgrace, and no respectable person could possibly understand or accept them. But Lenore steps out of the shadows with one request: “Let them see me!”

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I enjoyed this in the end. But it took me a long time to get into. I was bored for a lot of it. I kept waiting for the story I expected to begin, but eventually realized it wasn’t going to happen. This is a smaller, quieter telling. It’s not going to be everyone’s cup of tea; I’m not even sure it is mine. Or that I liked Poe much or his muse(s) much. But I did appreciate Winter’s take on Poe’s early life. It’s just that this seems to ring a single note over and over again, or maybe it’s that only a single bell tolls. All in all, I don’t regret having read it, but I’m glad to be finished and moving on.

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Book Review: Knight’s Prize, by Sarah McKerrigan

I’ve had a copy of Sarah McKerrigan’s (aka Glynnis Campbell) Knight’s Prize on my shelf for a while. I’m fairly sure I won it, since it is signed.

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THE WARRIOR MAIDS OF RIVENLOCH…

Damsels in shining armor…riding to the rescue!

Deirdre, Helena, and Miriel, three kick-arse Scots wenches, aren’t about to become any man’s chattel, until they meet heroes who are strong enough to tame their wild ways and worthy enough to win their wayward hearts.

Miriel of Rivenloch may not have the killer instincts of her older sisters, but she’s keeping a dangerous secret. She knows more than she’s letting on about the mysterious Shadow, the forest outlaw who robs from the rich and gives to the poor. And when devil-may-care mercenary Sir Rand la Nuit, hot on the trail of The Shadow, claims to be in love with Miriel, she knows he’s hiding something, too. It’s a battle of wits as they race to uncover each other’s secrets before their make-believe romance takes on a life of its own.

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This was a pretty big “meh” for me. The writing is fine, though all the words like ” twas ” got on my nerves. It felt like a gimmick that got old fast. And I thought that if I had to read the word “varlet” one more time, I might scream. Mostly, I was basically bored the whole time. There simply isn’t enough to the plot/story for me. I didn’t even really care about Miriel and Rand’s romance. I found them each individually tolerable, but together they were milquetoast to the extreme. Worse, milquetoast with ‘banter’ that just felt slightly skeevy. But I think my biggest complaint was that the reader is repeatedly told how capable and skilled Miriel is, yet shown almost none of it. In fact, she came across as incredibly inept, giving herself away in stupid ways over and over and over again. Thus, I had to wonder how stupid Rand was not to figure it out…or just how sexist, since that’s basically what it came down to. So, all in all, probably a winner for other readers, but not for me.

Side note: I wonder if the author realizes that the sentence in the blurb that says, “Deirdre, Helena, and Miriel, three kick-arse Scots wenches, aren’t about to become any man’s chattel, until they meet heroes who are strong enough to tame their wild ways and worthy enough to win their wayward hearts,” implies pretty strongly that the women do become chattel. I mean, it’s not all that inaccurate, but it’s sure not what I’m looking for in a romance.

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