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Book Review: Vicious Lost Boys (1-4), by Nikki St. Crowe

I picked up a copy of Nikki St. Crowe’s The Dark One to start the Vicious Lost Boys series I’ve heard so much about. Only to get it home and realize that I must not have been paying enough attention because I bought book 2, The Dark One, instead of book 1. So, I purchased e-copies of The Never King and Their Vicious Darling, and later borrowed The Fae Princes from the library (though there was a several-week wait for it).

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The stories were all wrong — Hook was never the villain.

For two centuries, all of the Darling women have disappeared on their 18th birthday. Sometimes they’re gone for only a day, some for a week or a month. But they always return broken.

Now, on the afternoon of my 18th birthday, my mother is running around the house making sure all the windows are barred and the doors locked.

But it’s pointless.

Because when night falls, he comes for me. And this time, the Never King and the Lost Boys aren’t willing to let me go.

Reviews:

The Never King

You know, I didn’t hate it. 100% it is problematic as hell. And I’ll fully admit that the particular kinks (and the sex, honestly) are not the sort I particularly go for in my erotica. However, I acknowledge that St. Crowe made it more than apparent that they are the ones that Winnie enjoys, and I respect Winnie for going for it. I liked that, even in a kidnapping situation, she creates agency for herself. She’s practical. She makes a plan and executes it. I’ll read the next one.

The Dark One

I’m still enjoying this series. Though I am admittedly just kind of tolerating the sex, as it’s not a set of kinks that I particularly click with. But the way St. Crowe lets Winnie use it, both for her own pleasure and in the Machiavellian sense, is appreciable. I like watching her take the initiative and the Lost Boys bend to her whims while their perspectives shift. The plot (past the erotic element) is fairly predictable, and (as is often the case with such books) I’m not thrilled that the FMC is made to seem special, in part, by being treated well while every other woman is seen and treated as worthless. But all in all, to my great surprise, I’m continuing the series.

Their Vicious Darling

I’m still generally enjoying this series, though I think some of the lustre has worn off. I’m basically skimming the sex scenes by this point because they aren’t what is keeping me reading, and I’ve started to find them redundant. (Yes, I realize this is an erotic series, but still.) What is keeping me reading is the familial love. This series has such a good representation of it, both blood-related family and found family, and I’m really appreciating how characters go to bat for their family. I’ll finish the series out. But I’m in the queue to get the last book from the library. Which tells you I want to read it, but not so badly that I need it right now.

The Fae Princes

I’m happy to have finished the series. I really appreciate the growth that happened here in the found family, with the men even being willing to express love for one another. I still found the sex kind of meh, though there’s less here than in previous books. And oddly, the whole thing felt a little rushed to me despite being 250+ pages long. But all in all, I finished pretty happy.


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Book Review: Alchemised, by SenLinYu

I purchased an ecopy of SenLinYu‘s Alchemised. Once I realized it was the published version of Manacled, which has been all over my feeds, I decided to read it. (Committing to a 1000+ page book right now is difficult.)

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Once a promising alchemist, Helena Marino is now a prisoner—of war and of her own mind. Her Resistance friends and allies have been brutally murdered, her abilities suppressed, and the world she knew destroyed.

In the aftermath of a long war, Paladia’s new ruling class of corrupt guild families and depraved necromancers, whose vile undead creatures helped bring about their victory, holds Helena captive.

According to Resistance records, she was a healer of little importance within their ranks. But Helena has inexplicable memory loss of the months leading up to her capture, making her enemies wonder: Is she truly as insignificant as she appears, or are her lost memories hiding some vital piece of the Resistance’s final gambit?

To uncover the memories buried deep within her mind, Helena is sent to the High Reeve, one of the most powerful and ruthless necromancers in this new world. Trapped on his crumbling estate, Helena’s fight—to protect her lost history and to preserve the last remaining shreds of her former self—is just beginning. For her prison and captor have secrets of their own . . . secrets Helena must unearth, whatever the cost.

my review

Let’s get the elephant in the room out of the way first. Alchemised does not need to be over a thousand pages long. The world isn’t that complicated. The plot isn’t particularly elaborate, and quite a lot of the events are redundant. The emotional impact could still have been achieved in half the pages. Less talented authors than SenLinYu have achieved it. That this is the pared-down version of the fanfiction it is based on is mindboggling.

Having said all of that, I did actually enjoy the book. The writing is readable. I liked the characters. I was invested in their success. I thought the author took on some interesting and challenging topics. I didn’t even have a problem with the rape, which there is so much discourse about in the review sections (and I’m often critical of rape as a plot device in books). All in all, somewhat to my own surprise, I finished the book happy. I liked it. 


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Audiobook Review: The Shadow Queen, by Sloane Murphy

Quite some time ago, I received an audio code for a copy of Sloane Murphy‘s The Shadow Queen (narrated by Jeannie Sheneman). Unfortunately, I started a university program shortly after that and ended up with very little time to listen to audiobooks. So, it’s been sitting in the cloud since then. I finally got to listen to it.

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Once upon a time, there was a princess who lived amongst the shadows and monsters…

Pampered and coddled, Morganna didn’t know any different, until her father took the person who mattered most away from her.

The brutal lesson taught her the truth. Nothing in her world is given. If you want it, you have to take it.

What she wants now is revenge and she will take the thing that matters most to her father.

She will claim The Shadow Realm… and it will be hers.

my review

Meh, I thought this was mediocre, but it basically skirts by as fine. I have no desire to continue the series, but I didn’t dislike the book enough to DNF. So…I guess it is what it is. It felt like it was written with a lot of tropes, but not much of an apparent plot until right at the end.

The reader barely gets to know anyone. The character descriptions are very shallow. This is made worse by the fact that just about the time you get used to one mate, he gets left behind while the FMC goes off with the next. It felt abrupt and a bit like a betrayal. And I did not find the pseudo-noncon humiliation kink/trope to be a positive replacement. I could have done without that entirely. I suppose that leaves room for character development and growth on the part of mate number two. But since I won’t be around for it, the whole thing just left a bitter taste.

I found the descriptions of the FMC really inconsistent. She’ll threaten to kick someone’s ass, but she’s so weak and untrained. She talks like such a badass, but she’s so sheltered and untried. She’s so powerful, but completely unaware of what she’s capable of, and is chronically underestimated. She’s a princess, but not like other royals or girls. (She actually uses the phrase “I’m not like other girls” about herself, even.) This last one begs the question: if she’s raised in the same environment as everyone else, how did she and her brother miraculously turn out to be different?

Lastly, let’s talk about the “Fucks.” Look, I curse like a sailor and fully understand that a well-placed “fuck” can be very effective. So, I am not being prudish when I say this. But the word is the shadow queen photoused far, far, far too frequently in this book. It is so often unnecessary in the sentence that it clutters the dialogue, and, worse, makes all the characters sound the same because they all sprinkle it liberally in their speech in precisely the same way. Eventually, it just started to grate on my nerves.

Look, I’m not saying this was a bad book. It’s readable, and the narrator did a fine job. But I am saying it didn’t do anything for me. I just got to the end and was annoyed with it.


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