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Book Review: Splintered Mind, by W.R. Gingell

I contributed to the Kickstarter for W.R. Gingell‘s Splintered Mind, so I got an early copy. I’m all in for doing the same for book two (Splintered Life) when it’s available, too.

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Viv just wants work—any work. Well, not quite any work. But she’s desperate enough to accept a job offer as personal assistant to Jasper Renner—the rich and mysterious owner of the Renner Tea House—even though odd things happen whenever he’s around.

She expects to deal with rich, entitled Melbournians and a full business schedule. Instead, Viv finds herself following Jasper into a strange new world where a murderous madman has been incarcerated in a secret floor at the old Kew Asylum that may or may not exist in the human world as she knows it.

Reality is just as worryingly soft at the old tea house itself, which hides a few too many not-quite-human secrets. In one of the downstairs rooms, there’s a little girl who has been a little girl for a suspiciously long time; in the uppermost floor, there are a few windows that show a view that doesn’t exist in Melbourne. And then there are the giant cephalopod tentacles that appear from nowhere and disappear again, seemingly at will…

Now Viv isn’t sure if she’s going mad, or if the world itself has gone mad and the lunatic in Kew Asylum is the only sane person she knows.

my review

I pre-ordered a copy of this book as soon as I saw Gingell had a new series coming out; it was one of my better decisions in life. I do so love her writing. Where I made a mistake in reading this one before the rest of the books are out. Because now I’m sitting here, bereft because Splintered Mind ended on a cliffie, and the next book isn’t available yet.

I have always appreciated a practical heroine, and if there is one thing to be said for Viv, it is that she is eminently level-headed and pragmatic. Having said that, I very much appreciated that Gingell didn’t drag out Viv’s awakening to Behind and Between by making her so grounded in reality that she wasn’t able to bend. From a reader’s perspective, it is painful to read a main splintered mind photocharacter’s denials well past the point that the plot needs to progress. I see this a lot (usually accompanied by some TST antics). So, props to Gingell for walking the knife’s edge on this one.

For those who have read Gingell’s other Behind/Between books, I’m reasonably sure I caught a few easter eggs, which was fun. I liked the male leads and the realism of Viv’s contested relationship with her father. I cannot wait for the rest of the series.


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Book Review: Feral Alphas, by Sierra Knoxly

I picked up an Amazon freebie copy of Sierra Knoxly‘s Feral Alphas, I think, during the most recent Stuff Your Kindle Day.

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I’m an omega used as scent bait for feral alphas fighting in underground deathmatches.

I was told I’m an omega without a heat—a lie.

The truth? My heats were medically suppressed, and now I’ve been sold as a secret weapon in a brutal underground where feral alphas are pitted against each other in fights to the death. When the Omega Crimes Bureau raids the ring, my dream of having love with a real pack seems within reach, but freedom is never that simple.

I won’t leave my feral alphas behind, and what sane pack would accept living with two violent killers?

my review

Meh. This was only okay. It started off well, and I expected to love it, but then it just kind of floundered. For a book called Feral Alphas, you’d think it would be a lot more focused on the actual…you know, feral alphas. They didn’t come into the story in any meaningful way until after the 65% mark, and only really one, at that. They were, At Most, side characters (the only characters without POVs, for example). This despite being part of the harem. Plus, they never reached full adult human cognizance, which made the sex scenes uncomfortable.

The rest of the men were all given super unbalanced attention, which made it feel like there were just too many of them to accommodate. I would call Colt and Luka the main pairing/main characters, not Rose, which feels strange in a reverse harem book. And Rose was very one-dimensional.

The thing is, the one-dimensionality wasn’t my biggest issue with her. My primary complaint was that she was 27 and started the book acting like an adult. AS SOON AS she found the first of her men, she read like a child. The state adopted her out like a child. She doesn’t laugh feral alphas photoanymore; she giggles. She doesn’t walk. She skips or runs on her tip toes. She does happy dances and wiggles excitedly. She throws temper tantrums, plays uno incessantly, frequently is put down for a nap, etc. I get that she was uncultured and never lived in a normal society. But there is uneducated, and there is infantilized. She is 100% infantilized, and it’s a HUGE pet peeve for me, especially in erotic books.

I liked the characters, and the writing is readable. But when it came down to it, I didn’t like many of the authorial choices.


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Book Review: His Human Assistant, by Michele Mills

I picked up a copy of Michele MillsHis Human Assistant as an Amazon freebie a while back.

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I’m a corporate whistleblower running for my life, so I take the first job I can find off planet.

Now I’m a lowly assistant for some rich devil named Hannibal Hellstone? And when I say “devil,” I mean DEVIL. As in this guy’s skin is dark red, he has shiny black horns, sharp fangs, silver-tipped claws and a barbed tail. This Hyrrokin is scary AF and his eight-year-old son looks just like him. And, he has a sharp-toothed, three-headed, fire-breathing “dog” at his side.

*gulp*

I’m supposed to live with my new boss?

I don’t know anything about kids. And I don’t like pets. But, jeez, this guy is hawt. And his kid is sweet too. My heart cracks open for them—and their “dog.”

Hannibal starts throwing heated glances my way. But if this honorable soldier knew the real me, the girl with the checkered past, would he still want me? Oh well, it’s not like this is going to get serious—he’s told everyone he’s never, ever, going to marry anyone ever again.

This is good, right?

That’s what I want too…right?

my review

Honestly, I was just bored by this. I appreciated the plus-sized, smart, capable heroine who takes the lead in the end, but the writing is prosaic and repetitive. (And there are some strange word choices… *cough* teats?!). The plot is bland and uninteresting, and the romance is sub-par.

Mostly, however, the characters don’t get to know one another (or not in a manner that the reader feels). So, what he seems to fall in love with is her body and all the ways she can be of service to him (his business, his son, and his dog), which is just ick, in my opinion. I don’t even know what she is supposed to have fallen in love with.

I have too many other books to read to bother with the rest of this series (even though I think I own some).

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