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Book Review: Edge of Magic, by Jayne Faith

I picked up a freebie e-copy of Jane Faith‘s Edge of Magic on Amazon, way back in 2020.

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My name is Tara Knightley, and I’m on the Fae mafia’s hit list. My childhood crush just rode back into town, too, and that may spell even bigger trouble . . .

My talent for sensing magical objects has made me a damn good professional thief for the past decade. But it’s also what got me into a blood oath with notorious Fae mob boss Grant Shaw.

My relationship with Shaw is rapidly souring, and I need to break free before it turns deadly. The solution? I must steal a magic skull from Shaw’s biggest rival and deliver it to him, and then he’ll nullify our blood oath.

Just as I’m set to go after the skull, my childhood best friend and crush, wolf shifter Judah McMahon, shows up asking for help. It’s been ten years since the falling out that ended our friendship, and I know I shouldn’t get involved.

But Judah’s life is threatened. How can I say no? The catch is, helping Judah will cost me the chance at freedom from Shaw . . . and possibly my life.

my review

I have very middle-of-the-road feelings about this book. On one hand, I liked the characters, the world seemed interesting, and—barring a few editing mishaps—the writing is pretty good.

On the other, the plot meanders. There is quite a lot of time dedicated to things that aren’t particularly plot-relevant. (I’m thinking the knife-throwing training session and, honestly, the whole sword side-quest.) It wasn’t until the very end that something resembling an actual single plot appeared.

The love interest is supposed to be super regretful for leaving her a decade ago, and we’re expected to root for a re-ignition of romance. But I didn’t feel it. He had 10 years to come back or just call/text/email. He’d even been in town several times. But he never contacted her until he needed something. I don’t feel any desire to see that romance bloom. How guilt-ridden and sorry could he truly be?

Further, I’ve gotten to an age that I’m just kind of done with plot in which women are in desperate financial straits, and a man swoops in with his money/resources/connections and fixes everything for her. I think Faith needed to decide if she was writing a contemporary, second chance romance, or a fantasy romance because the whole Judah plot-line felt disconcertingly contemp romance and out of place in the fantasy plot. And it sure took up too much page time.

But worst of all, I’m 100% sick of reading books that don’t end. A cliffhanger in which some threads wrap up, and others are left open is one thing. This book literally just abruptly stops. I edge of magic photoflipped the last page back and forth because I hadn’t sensed any sort of drawing to a close and basically felt like I walked into a wall with the sudden, “Look for Echo of Bone, the next book in the Tara Knightley Series by Jayne Faith!” In fact, the plot looked to finally be starting to settle into a single trajectory and ramping up. So, the precipitous ending felt especially unforeseen and jarring.

So, meh. I’d probably read the next book if I found it free, but I feel no need to buy it.


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Edge of Magic by Jayne Faith – A Book Review

 

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Book Review: Gilded Fae, by Erica Reeder

I purchased a Kindle copy of Gilded Fae, by Erica Reeder.
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When a dead faerie lands in her lap, bounty hunter Cy Vanguard knows her life is about to change.

Dandelions. People hate ’em. You know what Cy hates? Faeries in New York City. Sure, it sounds hypocritical since she is one too, but she doesn’t have wings. That means she gets a pass. Court law, not hers. Law or no, her winged compatriots keep popping up everywhere in the city like…well, dandelions. Talk about annoying. Especially when they’re dead.

Add one mouth-watering vampire– the mortal enemy of all faeries– to the slip-and-slide that has become her life and things become leakier than a porcupine’s umbrella. Now, Cy is slapped in the face with the fact that she might be done with faerie, but faerie isn’t done with her. She can’t run anymore. She has to choose. A people who never accepted her? Or a fiery love and the death of everything she knows?

my review

Soooo, I didn’t love this. In fact, I wanted very badly to DNF it based on the characters’ unbelievable stupidity and lack of care or concern for the safety of her people. The only reason I didn’t is that I actually bought the first 3 books in the series at the same time. I wanted to at least finish book 1, so that I can at try book 2 to see if the series improves. But I didn’t enjoy the book and honestly skimmed a lot of the end of it.

The problems are multiple. As I said, the main character is just TSTL. The fact that the author morphed the plot to make it all work out doesn’t change how dangerous and stupid her actions were. I’m talking about taking a stranger and a human who doesn’t know the supernatural exists to investigate a supernatural death, thereby exposing her entire race (and the author never addresses this). And believe me when I say NOTHING in this decision made sense, plot-wise.

She’s also supposed to be a well-trained martial artist, but I don’t think she wins a single fight the whole book. And I’m supposed to believe faeries all have special powers (control of wind, fire, electricity, etc) and they’re not trained to use them defensively (but they learn muay thai)?

Repeatedly, the author would hand us an interesting event (finding out her friend is a werewolf or that her boyfriend is a vampire, for example) and then cut away and never return to the scene. In fact, sometimes we never even saw the character again. The plot meandered and felt anchor-less. I was honestly confused by a lot of it. The love interest’s character development is that he is hot. That’s it in its entirety. And lastly, while I could handle the occasional grammar and punctuation errors, the inconsistencies almost drove me to distraction. (For example: asking to borrow someone’s phone, then digging her own out to make a call. Thinking, ‘How could no one have told me?’ about something, and then the next paragraph saying, ‘The report said…’ about that same thing. Being rescued from a party at home and then her asking, ‘How did you know I was at the club.’ The ‘whole vampires think we’re extinct’ (and comment on it) while vampires are actively using faerie blood as a drug in front of them. Where did she think it came from?)

I am willing to give book two a chance. I read a review saying Sven isn’t in it, so that gives me hope. But if it’s not better than this one, I won’t bother with book 3, let alone the rest of the series.


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Book Review of Gilded Fae by Erica Reeder

 

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Book Review: Raven’s Cry & Raven’s Song, by Charlie Nottingham

In May, when the SCOTUS leak first dropped, before the Supreme Court actually made their appalling ruling on Roe vs Wade, Charlie Nottingham organized a #ReadForOurRights event over on Tiktok. She and several other authors agreed to donate the proceeds from book sales that month to campaigns fighting to reestablish and/or protect women’s rights. I ordered several books from several authors during this event. (Something like 17, if I’m remembering right.) Raven’s Cry was one of them. Then, because I enjoyed Raven’s Cry I ordered Raven’s Song…then I saw the author was looking for ARC readers so I signed up, getting a copy a little early.


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Everyone has skeletons in their closet, but Rain’s are learning to open the door.

Rain’s lost everything in the last decade. Her grandmother, her brother, and her family home might be next. All she has is Graham – a powerful Fae who illegally escaped the Fae Realm and has been her best friend ever since.

Until Ezra – the sexiest Vampire she’s ever seen – commissions her for one hell of a job. Cleansing dozens of vengeful spirits from an abandoned mansion for a life changing amount of money.

All Rain wants is to focus on her budding relationship with Ezra, but the ghosts in the mansion have awoken the ones Rain has spent a decade trying to keep locked up.

But Rain isn’t the only one with secrets. Ezra has a few of his own.

my review

This was my first Charlie Nottingham book, and I enjoyed it a lot more than I expected. I liked all of the characters, the world seems interesting, and the writing flows naturally. Focus-wise, I’d consider it much more a sweet building-of-a-polyamorous-relationship than anything else. (Which makes me laugh because it’s labeled a “Dark Paranormal Romance Reverse Harem.”) raven's cry photoI’m not suggesting the fantasy element is unimportant. But it is definitely given less page time than the romantic elements. And I found it far sweeter than I did dark.

It’s also quite slow to build, both the 4-way relationship (with one of the men not even appearing until quite late in the book) and the fantasy/mystery/action element, which only really ramps up toward the end of the book. None of this is said to discourage reading the book. I enjoyed the heck out of it. In fact, I finished it disappointed to discover book two wasn’t out yet. I pre-ordered it, though. So, all in all, I think I’ve found a new author to follow.


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Everyone has skeletons in their closet, but Rain’s are learning to open the door.

Rain’s lost everything in the last decade. Her grandmother, her brother, and her family home might be next. All she has is Graham – a powerful Fae who illegally escaped the Fae Realm and has been her best friend ever since.

Until Ezra – the sexiest Vampire she’s ever seen – commissions her for one hell of a job. Cleansing dozens of vengeful spirits from an abandoned mansion for a life changing amount of money.

All Rain wants is to focus on her budding relationship with Ezra, but the ghosts in the mansion have awoken the ones Rain has spent a decade trying to keep locked up.

But Rain isn’t the only one with secrets. Ezra has a few of his own.

my review

I enjoyed this a lot, though I’ll admit I didn’t love it quite as much as book one. The reasons are 100% personal preference sort of stuff though. Before I get to that, let me extol the virtues of the book. The writing is clean and easy to read. I adore the characters and that they believably struggle with learning to tolerate/like/love one another over time. I liked the inclusion of shards of real life that often get glossed over during sex scenes, like washing hands after certain activities, etc. I love that we get everyone’s point of view and the mystery has kept me guessing. Overall, I’m 100% looking forward to book three. But I did have complaints, personal ones, but complaints all the same.

One of my biggest annoyances in sexy-time books is what I call ‘instructional sex’ or ‘instructional kink.’ It’s not that I think instruction or clear communication of boundaries and expectations is bad in any way. But you don’t have to have read many of such books before it all gets repetitive. I’ve just read explanations of various kinks or relationships or safe words/signs, etc so many times in so many books that I’m bored with it. It tends to make me skim.

And Raven’s Song has quite a lot. There are four people in the relationship, various kinks, and various interpersonal expectations. So, I felt like over half the book is ‘instructional,’ in the ‘this is how we do things’ or ‘this is how this works’ or ‘this is where my line is’ sort of ways. I thought it bogged the narrative down.

Understanding, of course, that readers were probably meant to go, ‘Aww, look how open and communicative they are all being,’ and readers who enjoy that will love this book. Because I do think Nottingham did a good job with it and the characters are wonderfully communicative with one another. But I just find it boring in the extreme since it’s all just a variation on something read before.

Similarly, the sex here didn’t light me up. I thought for having three men involved, who were all meant to be very different, all the sex felt same-same. I wouldn’t have been able to tell one man from another without names. And the descriptions themselves didn’t appeal to me. I understand that one character has a rough bent, but I found myself pinching my knees together protectively during his sex scenes.

Note, I said knees. It wasn’t the slapping or even the degradation (though that’s not my favorite kink). I could handle that a lot more easily than just how generally indelicate his treatment of her delicate bits is. Everything is described as some sort of motoring in hard, fast, rough ways. But not in a sexy (for me) way. More like you’d push a doorbell or scrape paint—something that takes force to overcome resistance. I’m complaining, I think, more of the language in the raven's song photodescriptions than the use of kink or even the acts themselves. But it all felt very gross-motor and unappealing to me. But again, THAT IS A PERSONAL PREFERENCE sort of complaint, not a quality.

All in all, there were a few not-for-me aspects, but at least one of them I feel like has been done and shouldn’t need to be carried over into the next book and I’m eagerly awaiting further coming together of the four individuals and the mystery. I look forward to the next book.


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Book Review: Raven’s Cry by Charlie Nottingham