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Book Review: Heart’s Prisoner and Dark’s Savior, by Olivia Riley

I received a copy of Olivia Riley’s Heart’s Prisoner and Dark’s Savior in this month’s Renegade Romance Book Box. As an unrelated sidenote: since these are special edition covers, I’ll mention that I like them a lot less than the original covers. They are significantly (and disappointingly) less nuanced and detailed, and basically look like a cheap knock-off of the original.

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He’s not like anything Lana has ever encountered.

Asset X: Massive, deadly, a little terrifying to say the least. A devilish warrior. And a killer. Captured on a hellish world after attacking a military campsite and now imprisoned in a state-of-the-art cell inside one of the military’s top bases–Lazris.

And Lana has been assigned to “study” him. To learn his secrets and gain his trust, if he is ever allowed to set foot out of his cell. As a top behaviorist, it is the biggest hurdle of her career.

Asset X–or Xerus as he is called–won’t give up his secrets easily. He is difficult, elusive, and–dare she say–unfathomably alluring…despite his seething demeanor and hard, frightening physique.

Something subconsciously draws her to him. Something wildly irresistible. Even if his wicked smile and needful gaze could just be a ploy to win her trust and escape his cell.

She shouldn’t think of him like that. He is an alien after all. And possibly their enemy.

For Xerus claims he is on a mission. A mission to destroy. And he cannot afford to fail. If he dares let Lana get close, dares open his cold heart to her, she could compromise everything.

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I generally enjoyed this, so long as I don’t think too deeply about it. If I did, I’d have to admit that there are a lot of plot holes, and the editing is pretty shoddy. But, so long as I’m determined to overlook these facts for the escapism, I think this is a sweet, low-spice, fairly low-angst read. Lana is smart and shows a backbone when she needs to. Xerus is a paint-by-numbers alien romantic lead, but I liked him all the same.

hearts prisoner photoI did struggle a little with two things that could be covered under plot holes, but I feel compelled to mention them since they especially annoyed me. One, Lana sends Xerus out to essentially run errands for her in the middle of what should be dangerous and frightening times. This very effectively undermined Riley’s attempt to build tension in the plot. Second, Lana’s willingness to give up her own culture and completely take on Xerus’ slaps of toxic patriarchy’s insistence that women, when they marry, give up who they are and become of-their-husband. Sure, I’m not reading Alien Romance for exemplary feminist takes. But I still call out our culture’s BS when it stands out so starkly in my entertainment.


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A chance encounter can change everything.

When Aly joined the Grayhart mission to find advanced civilizations within deep space, she didn’t expect to be captured far from home and taken to Xolis–a galactic empire like none ever seen, ruled by the nillium–a powerful race with a serious god complex.

Now outsiders, Aly and her team of explorers are sent to the darkest place within Xolis: Lethe Maws. A mining city on a planet home to outcasts, slaves, and monstrous creatures lurking in the deep dark.

And home to the Dark One, a dangerous exile even the nillium fear, living at the bottom of the mines where all are warned never to go.

When Aly runs into the legendary alien in a very unlikely place, what she finds is no monster but a large, mysterious, nillium male with fierce silver eyes, who makes her heart race.

But though the nillium outcast had reached for her, desiring to touch her, fascinated by her as she was of him, Aly soon learns he’s not looking to be friends or possibly something more.

For what Aly doesn’t know is the Dark One–known by his kind as Ryziel, son of the nillium’s now dead ruler–isn’t looking for love or a mate. He’s looking to get off Lethe Maws for good and return home to his brother, the only family who accepts him for who he is, the only one who matters.

But the human woman brings out a darker part of him that he can’t control–something he never thought possible. As he is determined to escape, he struggles to understand his need for her. A need to protect her. A need to claim her. But determined not to let her get too close lest she be his undoing.

Try as he might to keep her at a distance, Aly will become the one thing Ryziel needs to be free.

my review

Meh, this was fine, I suppose. It was structurally almost exactly the same as book one. The same darks savior photo“I’m pushing you away for your own good,” the same skeevy male attention, the same cardboard male romantic lead, the same sort of plot that keeps the two apart for most of the book, etc. This probably wouldn’t have made the books feel so generic if I hadn’t read them back to back. But I did, so…

I like Aly well enough. I thought the world interesting-ish. I like the shadow Ryziel casts. But that’s all I can call it. I don’t feel like the reader gets to know him well, and, honestly, I never really felt the spark between the two of them. All in all, this was a pretty middle-of-the-road read. I didn’t hate it, but I won’t remember it next week either.


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Book Review: Splintered Life, by W.R. Gingell

I contributed to W.R. Gingell‘s Kickstarter for this book in order to get a copy as early as possible. Splintered Life is book two in the Shattered World series. I reviewed book one, Splintered Mind, here.

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The world isn’t the same as it was yesterday. In fact, Viv is no longer sure that she is the same as she was yesterday. She can do something she never knew was possible—and Luca tried to kill her, just like Jasper said he would if she let him get too close.

At the teahouse, it’s business as usual, tentacles in the top floor, an invasion of not-quite-real-but-nevertheless-terrifying spiders…and a new murderer to catch, of course. Someone is trying to make sure a Greek-Australian couple never makes it to the altar, and it’s not just perfume they’re sneaking into the bride’s room.

But Luca isn’t talking to Viv; not since she stopped him from escaping. That shouldn’t be surprising—and the last thing Viv should be doing is trying to talk to him more than she has to—but there’s another murderer on the loose, and they’re going to need Luca’s help to catch him.

Life was already hard, but now Viv has to somehow stop the wilder side of that life from spilling over into her normal life. Her human life. But if the two halves begin to split apart, which should she try to hold onto?

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Ugh, why do I start a series that aren’t finished? Well, I know why. Gingell is one of my favorite authors, and I was so excited to get a new series from her that I contributed to the Kickstarter so I could get the books early and then dove right in. But I’m a binger. Waiting between books is agonizing!

I very much appreciated that just about everyone in this book started the book angry with one another but eventually were able to come to equilibrium again. Viv and Luca together form an adorable manzai-like double act (with Viv the straight (wo)man and Luca the funny-man). Jasper isn’t in this book as much as the last, but he and the rest of the Tea House are a great cast of characters. Plus, I love how the other Behind/Between series seem to be weaving together.

Obviously, I can’t wait for the next book.

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Book Review: Dark City Omega, by Elizabeth Stephens

I received a copy of Elizabeth StephensDark City Omega in a Renegade Romance Book Box.

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When Omegas run away, the beasts of Gatamora come out to play… Echo knew that being caught by a ruling Berserker would mean becoming his pawn, a play thing to be used for her powers. That wouldn’t be her fate. She’d rather run lost through the woods forever, dangerous though they may be. But there’s something even more sinister than beasts and Berserkers lurking in the woods. Something both undead and deadly. She can’t fight it alone. She’ll have to turn to the Berserker who’s caught the trail of her scent and won’t let it go. He says she’s his. She says never. He says forever. Bones, bonds and hearts will be broken. Some battles can’t be won. Run, Omega, run.

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I found this a really frustrating book to read because there would be moments when I would see such potential in it. But then Stephens would ALWAYS choose to lean into the cliched, patriarchal, usually flat-out misogynistic tropes instead of the interesting, dissident, sometimes even transgressive ones her own plotline, as written, would allow for. There were times she even did this when the plot couldn’t support it, forcing the characters to enact popular kink or BDSMy acts that fit neither of the characters’ personalities up to or beyond that point.

Or, for example, making the male lead grovel satisfyingly (as he should) while the female lead shows admirable backbone in setting reasonable boundaries. Then, immediately making him disregard everything she said, each boundary, and his own just spoken promises to bypass her consent and firmly stated boundaries to force a kiss on her and declare his desires and intent (which run counter to hers and disregard the fact he is doing what she just said she didn’t want). Of course, she then just accepts it, forgives him, and picks up right where they left off because sex makes it all OK. And make no mistake, Stephens wrote this to be romantic. He wants her this badly, bla, bla, bla. It’s almost a satisfying scene, but is utterly ruined by cliches instead of giving us true introspection and character growth.

I suppose I’ve just reached a point where, as much as I once enjoyed ABO fiction, stories that uncritically place women in socially submissive, abuse-as-romance cultures are a little too on the nose for contemporary America, and I can’t suspend my disbelief enough to enjoy them anymore. But Stephens also tries to have her cake and eat it too in this regard. She wants the dark city omega photoreader to believe Adam (and supposedly future berserker heroes) truly loves and value their omega mates (can see them as equals) and that omegas are rare and valuable. But she also placed them in a world that treats omega (which correlatively is a stand-in for women, even ifthere are two token male omegas—the mechanics of their omega-ness never addressed) where omegas are considered worthless trash to be caught and thoughtlessly raped to death. This is both displayed and explicitly voiced in the book. It’s one or the other. Maybe other authors can pull it off, but it definitely didn’t gel here.

All in all, I wish I liked this a lot more than I did. I saw a lot I could have liked if Stephens was a different sort of author, writing a different sort of book.


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