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Book Review: Reaper Unexpected, by Debbie Cassidy

Debbie Cassidy‘s Deadside Reapers series was over on Sadie’s Spotlight a while back. So, when I happened to see book one, Reaper Unexpected, on the Amazon freebie list, I picked up a copy. Then I opted to buy the compilations of the rest of the series. (I don’t know why it’s broken into two.)

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Your dead are our business.

Got a loved one who’s passed? Want to ask your dead aunt where she hid that elusive will? Head over to Necro city and look no further than Soul Savers Inc.

One day the world was normal, and the next, it was filled with ghosts. And then the reapers came. Blood-sucking hot dudes with wings and wicked scythes. They took control, and now we have a system.

Now we have Necro city, the hub of all things untethered.

As a soul relocation agent, it’s my job to rehouse the dead until the reapers come to collect, but with so few of those dudes about, the wait isn’t pretty. Thank goodness for decent coffee, frosted donuts, and a pending promotion.

Things are looking good until they’re not.

One bar fight and a dead reaper later, I’m left holding the scythe.

Not just any scythe, but a scythe belonging to one of Lilith’s four favored sons—the most powerful reapers in the world.

For some reason, it’s chosen me.

Now, three very large, very pissed off reapers are on my case.

It looks like that promotion is going to have to wait.

my review

This is going to be a long review. But I’m reviewing the whole series (all 7 books) in one review. So, it would kind of be unreasonable to expect brevity.

The reason I chose to write a single review, rather than one for each book, is that the story is paced over the series, not individual books. If you’d like a review of the individual books, I would consider the previous sentence to fulfill the request. The individual books do not stand alone. They are nothing more than slices of the larger whole. So, I’d suggest committing to the whole thing or not bothering. (I wish I’d known that before I started book one.)

When I say it’s paced over the series, not the books, I mean that you reach the end of a “book” and have neither reached nor passed a climax of any sort, nor have you completed an arc of the story, etc. It’s just the first, second, third, 100, 200, 300 pages of the 1600ish-page story. There is nothing else to signify the beginning, middle, or end of a book.  Thus, I do not consider them books in their own right, in any manner beyond the reader being required to purchase each leg of the story individually.

deadside reaperes 1-3As an example of this pacing, in book one, the heroine spends 80% (literally 80%) with one of the men. (Keep in mind that this is a Why Choose Romance that ends with 6 or 7 men, depending on how you count one of them.) She’s met one other, but he is only a side character. At 80%, he has a bit of a personality shift and becomes relevant, and the third man appears for the first time. At 80% into the book, she meets one of her romantic partners. She doesn’t even meet all of the men until far later in the series.

The author calls the series a slow burn, but slow burn refers to a type of romance, not to a type of story. I sincerely think I kept reading just because I wanted to reach a point at which I had read something, anything in its completion. And I kept coming to the end of “books” and not feeling like I’d found it.

Now I will say that I love Fee’s backbone. Cora is marvelous and even more badass, in my opinion. I liked most of the romantic partners individually. I appreciate how the worldbuilding was conscience. The author gives us a good understanding of it all without info dumping. And the writing is mechanically sound. So, I’m not claiming the series is without merit.

But I also admit that I kept reading just to experience the absolute train wreck of it all. It 100% felt like the author didn’t have a plan, just dropped whatever occurred to her on the page and ran with it. As such, the thin thread that tied the series together was frequently forgotten in favor of whatever randomness popped up. Similarly, entire important characters (romantic partner level important) just dropped away, forgotten for a while, and then re-emerged, which made it hard to maintain any care for them.

Every important male character who isn’t related to her wants and pursues her. But there is no sex until 98% through the 3rd book. That’s a long way to ride on hints and suggestions. What’s more, when there is finally a sex scene, it’s miserable sex. It actually contains the words, “there can be no foreplay,” and no one involved wants it. I might not feel so cheated if all of the sex scenes weren’t bad…just bad. Nothing about them is particularly enticing.

I’m not sure if I was supposed to be emotionally attached to Fee and her men or Fee and cock in general. Because the author treats them as if they are interchangeable. The men come and go, often disappearing for long periods of time to be replaced by other men. By the end, any attachment I might have started to feel died, and every aspect of every relationship with every man just felt flat…as did ALL OF THE SEX SCENES.

Fee is just too special for words. Every powerful man either wants to claim her or turns out to be related to her. EVERY ONE. (Though I’ll note that every single powerful woman either wants to kill her, use her, or is absent entirely.) It’s not unusual for a book or series to contain several tropes, but this series takes on way too many and then gives them ALL to the SINGLE main character.

She’s the first female alpha wolf in 40 years, a witch, a demon, a dominus (when you really shouldn’t be able to be all of them), a soulmate to one of the most powerful dominus, lover of another, the last and lost brood of one of the most powerful demon bloodlines, the lost daughter of one of the most powerful shifter alphas, daughter of the most powerful fallen angel and inheriter of his ultimate power, a fated mate to two alphas (which makes her a member of deadside reapers 4-7a trifecta and therefore extra powerful), the only one who can save the worlds (more than once). She goes into heat, can talk to animals, and is wanted by basically all the most powerful men in paranormal society. She’s the kindest and the most compassionate, effortlessly and cluelessly sexy, etc. It’s too much, and it’s not enough, in the sense that there is so much crammed in that nothing is developed. There eventually came a point where I kept reading just to see what else the author might cram in there. And about the same time, everything just became painfully predictable.

And, honestly, some of the tropes weren’t even utilized effectively. Going into heat, for example, would suggest fertility. But despite having unprotective sex during the heats (and other times), impregnation is never discussed. The heat seems to be devoid of any purpose.

There are also a number of questionable conveniences, where things just happen to fall into place at the right time. Or someone just happens to give important information just when it’s needed (but never before). But there is no consistency in the importance of events. For example, the literal unraveling, end of the world apocalypse happens simultaneously with an underworld war, and an earth-side missing person’s police investigation. All three are treated with the exact same gravitas. And when finished are just dropped with ease. I don’t think I’ve ever seen saving the world treated with such disregard. Like, shrug, ok, done with that, on to the next thing.

I could go on. There were any number of elements over these 7 books that I’d like to vent about. But I’ll just say that I kept reading in the same way you can’t look away from some grotesque display. By the end of the series, I was definitely skimming and praying for it to end, but also intrigued by how else the author could make Fee special.

All in all, I’m just glad to actually be finished. But as a side note, I want to address the covers…or at least the first one. When the series begins, the character is curvy. The reader sits through more than one internal monologue about the state of her hips and thighs because of her love of baked sweets. Then she gets quite explicitly fat-shamed (it’s done with an undertone of salaciousness, but fat-shamed all the same). To have a mid-sized to fat woman described in the book and then have, not only a thin woman but a thin, ripped woman with visible abs represent her on the cover is an insult. Sure, she trains as the series goes on. But she’s called curvy even into the 3rd book. This sort of thing infuriates me. Why bother with any fat rep if you’re going to rip it away on the cover?


Other Reviews:

Reaper Unexpected by Debbie Cassidy – A Book Review

Or Books And Blurbs: Debbie Cassidy (post for each book)

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Book Review: Wolf Gone Wild, by Juliette Cross

I purchased a paperback copy of Wolf Gone Wild, by Juliette Cross.

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What’s the worst thing that can happen to a werewolf?

Unable to shift for three months, Mateo Cruz knows all too well. His wolf has taken up residence in his head, taunting him night and day with vividly violent and carnal thoughts. Convinced he’s cursed, he needs the help of a powerful witch before he literally goes insane.

Evie Savoie has always obeyed the house rules of her coven–no werewolves. They’re known for being moody and volatile. So, when a distempered, dangerous werewolf strolls in the bar and almost strangles one of her late-night customers, she’s ready to bounce him through the door. But the desperation in his eyes when he begs her to help him softens her heart and convinces her to bend the rules.

What Evie doesn’t know is that Mateo’s wolf has a mind of his own. And now that she’s in his sights, he wants only one thing. Her.

my review

This was a big MEH for me, but mostly because I’m the wrong reader for it. It is paranormal, with witches, vampires, shifters, etc. But the fantasy aspect is definitely nothing more than background shading. Most of the actual plot is just Evie and Mateo flirting and falling in love, the same as in any sweet contemporary romance. And I avoid sweet contemporary romances with extreme prejudice because they bore me to tears. As such, I was bored with 99% of this book.

The case wasn’t helped by the fact that it is very heavy on pop-culture references. But I am a person who literally goes years between binge-watching shows sometimes. I have not seen the wolf gone wild photonew Starwars movies. I couldn’t tell you what characters are DC and which Marvel, etc. So, almost all of the “Aww, isn’t Evie’s geekery so cute and relatable” fell FLAT for me. These are not references that hold any emotional impact for me, and thus I was…again…bored.

If I used stars on this blog, I’d give the book three stars for being competently written/edited and having likable enough characters. But I am not the right reader for this kind of paranormal romance.


Other Reviews:

Review – Wolf Gone Wild by Juliette Cross

Alpha’s Commentary is Spectacular! Wolf Gone Wild by Juliette Cross [ARC Review]

 

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Book Reviews: I Don’t Kneel for Monsters & Wolf’s Bite, by Atlas Rose

I received this edition of a compilation of two Atlas Rose books in my September Supernatural Book Crate. It contains two first in series, I don’t Kneel for Monsters and Wolf’s Bite. Though some older editions of the latter have Kim Faulks on the cover too. So, I’m assuming she is (or was) a co-writer.

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I don’t Kneel for Monsters:

 I might be chained, but I’m no prisoner.
They won’t let me leave this pack of demonic beasts with their red glowing eyes and their pawing touch. They keep me locked up during the day and surrounded by their heat at night.

They keep me…
Confined.
Controlled.
Consumed.

Men who are monsters and monsters who look like men. Trading my fear for their sick, demented games. I hate them. Hate it when they make me run. Hate it when they call it a ‘hunt’. But the capture.

The capture is something I can’t stop thinking about.
Fangs and claws. Their hunger is insatiable.
Until the night I saw him.
A man standing in the middle of a labyrinth where we hid.

A man dressed in white.

He’s here to save me. Here to get me away from these monsters. I just know it. I’ll run to him, the first chance I get. I’ll get away from those demonic creatures…I’ll save myself anyway I can.

Or I’ll die trying.

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my review

I have to say that I’m just confused by this book. There are so may glaring inconsistencies (both in the plot and in the writing itself) and then the whole thing ends on a cliffhanger without providing the reader any sort of payoff for sticking with the book through all the confusion.

Here are some of the types of inconsistencies I mean. In the beginning, 5 wolves break into Arden’s house and kidnap her. However, for the rest of the book, there are only 4—Moody, Broody, Cheeky, and Alpha. (She gave them the stupid names to annoy them.) We lost a Hellhound somewhere. Where? No idea. I can’t even be sure when, because most of the time I was uncertain which hellhound was doing what.

I’m pretty sure her heart stopped about six time before she actually ‘died.’ I was never sure if it was creative license and hyperbole or if it was actually stopping. The button on her jeans was popped off twice. She was later wearing panties that had already been ripped off, same with a shirt. Do her clothes heal? So, the kind of stuff a half way attentive beta reader or editor would have caught.

Mostly I won’t be continuing the series though, because (unless its a duology) the next book will I don't kneel for monsters photoprobably provide as little pay off as this one; same for the one after that, etc. I realize indie authors are being told this whole half-a-book to hook readers is what they should be writing. I know it’s a whole thing in the industry. But I cannot express how much I hate it. In fact, the physical copy I have also contains Wolf Bite, as I said. And I’m strongly considering not bothering to read it, even if that leaves the ‘book’ unfinished and I can’t move it from the unread to the read shelf. Simply because I don’t really want to set my self up for another disappointment of a half-written book. Can this trend die yet?


Wolf’s Bite:

I carry his bite mark on my shoulder…and the memory of what I’d done in his bed.

Phantom, the Alpha of Crown City Wolves might think he has a handle on me…
He might think this is more than what it was…

He’s about to find out he’s wrong.

I don’t belong to the Wolves of Crown City. I belong to the FBI.
My sole purpose has been hunting scum who sit in their ivory tower and shatter people’s lives.
I’ve hunted the Costello for years now.
They’re lower than low…they are liars…they’re mobsters.

They’re Mafia.

This is more than a case for me.

This was personal.

The last bullet in my father’s policing career. Ruined because of them.

Only a war erupted. A war which I’m now part of…a war between the beasts that roam my city and the powerful Immortals they answer to.

I replayed that night in slow motion. Fangs. Blood…and Phantom. The Alpha of the Wolves. The one I saved from a rogue Vampire.

And the one who saved me.

my review

I will grant that this book was significantly better than the first in the compilation. But that’s a long way from saying it’s good. It could be a heck of a lot closer though, if Rose hired an editor…or even just enlisted a friend to beta read and keep track of the inconsistencies.

About halfway through this book, I posted a whole Tiktok suggesting some authors need a beta service geared solely toward keeping track of a character’s clothes so that they don’t take bras off twice, etc. I didn’t name her, but Rose was who I was talking about.

@seesadieread how does something like this get consistently missed is my other thought. #authortalk #authortok #books #smexscene #booktalk #booktok #authorserivice #reader #seesadieread #books #editing #youalreadydidthat #monsterromance ♬ original sound – SadieF

I’m generally pretty patient about editing. But Rose’s editing is so consistently shoddy in this department that I started to lose my will to continue, after a while. Oddly, it’s not even typos and the normal sloppy editing. Rose just can’t seem to keep track of the elements of her plot. A wolf approaching someone who is already leaning on him, for example. Clothes that get taken off or ripped up more than once, etc.

Outside of the editing issue, I’m torn. I did like the characters. I especially liked how desperate Phantom and his pack were and how we got to see his POV, even if he showed an alpha a-hole face to the world. I’m interested to know what happens next (if I can tolerate more of the inconsistencies).

wolf's bite photoI wasn’t aware that this is a spin-off series. And there were definitely some elements that made no sense to me. Characters were named that were not in the book, a whole war raged for reasons I didn’t know about, etc. So, I would not recommend reading this without reading Rose’s other series (despite being labeled book one). And it ends on a cliffhanger. I am SO tired of books that don’t end!

All in all, I think I’d continue the series if I came across a free copy. But I don’t think I’d buy another book so poorly edited.


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