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Poetry and other such bits and bobs

I started a little bit of a poetry (and such) challenge almost by accident. I promised myself that I would be better about reading down my overflowing bookshelves of physical books this year. As a first wave, I went through and pulled several slim volumes that I thought I could read quickly. The first turned out to be poetry (and a few microfiction story collections), which led me to ask, `Oh, how many other such books do I have?’

I found several, enough to build a reading challenge around them. So, that’s what I did: I built a mini reading challenge around poetry, micro-lit, and other slim volumes of artsy or uncategorizable reads (things I probably wouldn’t give a whole post to, but still want to document). This included several poetry volumes, 3 humorous parenting books, a few books with short stories, some essays, some sarcastic philosophy, and a love letter to literature in the form of a memoir.

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Up there are the books, and down here are brief reviews:

Primarily Poetry:

Life in the Slow Lane, by Ruth Anderson

I picked up this little book of poems in a local little free library. The author was (at the time, it’s from the 90s) 83, living in one of the local assisted living facilities in town, and selling these herself. I can’t even find it on Goodreads. It was a true indie endeavor.

As I said above, I’ve been trying to read-down the poetry books on my shelves. So, I’ve read several books of verse lately, some more experimental than others. I appreciate Anderson’s poetry because it is very straightforward but also lively, with an occasional cozy everyday element. I even texted one of them to my daughter because I thought it described her own situation well, and she’d get a chuckle from it. I think this was my favorite of this whole batch of poetry books (and I can’t even review it on GR to let people know 😂.)

The Purity of Jazz & Speckled Trout & Other Prose & Poetry, by James R. Campbell

This was OK. I suppose it all comes down to preferences. Campbell has a surprisingly different voice in his poetry and prose. I felt little for the poetry, liking some more than others. And while I can appreciate the competency of the short stories, none of them resonated much with me. I think Campbell tends toward rural noir (yes, I made that term up), where everyone is bad in some fashion, and no one gets a happy ending. Meh, it feels pedestrian. But I also suspect these are just stories by a man, about and for other men, and as a woman, there isn’t a lot in them to hook me. I will say that the author isn’t guilty of booby-boobily, though, which is a pleasant surprise.

Memory in Silhouette, by T.L. Cooper

I claim no expertise in poetry. I judge it entirely on whether I like it or not. So, take anything I say with a grain of salt. Some of Cooper’s poems I liked, some I didn’t. But the vast majority of them I had no opinion on because they made no impact on me, which leaves me thinking they’re rather mundane. The book definitely has a discernible and satisfying order to the poems, though. I felt I’d been on a bit of a journey with the author. I hope she gets (or got) that second, second, second chance.

Stories and Poems of a Class Struggle, by Roque Dalton

I didn’t know I was into political poetry, but I liked these a lot, especially those written under the pseudonym Jorge Cruz. I appreciated the bibliographic information about Dalton beforehand, too.

To the Man in the Red Suit, by Christina Fulton

A little bit dark, a little bit absurd. This feels like Fulton’s homage to her dead father…or to her father’s suicide. I liked some of them; didn’t get many of them.

The Song of the Horse, by Samuel Hazo

Meh, I’m sure these poems are technically fine. I just didn’t particularly connect with most of them…and not just because of Hazo’s tendency to boobs boobied boobily, which he seems to do when discussing every non-familial woman in the book.

He says in one (Thus Spoke Mercutio),

                                 Let us
have poetry that strikes us dumb
or leaves us stabbed so deeply
that the wound in perpetuity stays raw.
Let us have that or nothing

Put simply, I did not find this here. Of those I came closest, it was the soldiering poems I liked most. So, though Hazo seems to have the mechanics of poetry down—and I’m sure there are some who will relate to and love these poems—I read them but felt little in response.

Both Wings Flappin’, Still Not Flyin’, by Jane Ellen Ibur

I’m convinced this is what love looks like: all-consuming, devastating, and difficult. But also the stuff that fills one’s own cup and makes days worth living. Ibur’s story, never wholly told but hinted at so completely that it’s known, broke my heart. I felt her love for Mary and her prolonged grief at her loss.

Undivided Lines, by Robert Lampros

This is a local-to-me author, and I always love to support local authors. I did, however, initially miss the fact that this is Christian fiction—a disappointment for sure. However, I’m pleased to report it wasn’t overpowering for most of the stories. (One or two got a little heavy-handed in the religion department, but most didn’t.) I generally thought this was a refreshing little collection of relatively short stories.

Bananas Republic, by J.J. McNiece

I won this copy of Banana Republic somewhere, probably Goodreads or LibraryThing. On reading it, I got a few chuckles. I appreciated what I think some of the political commentary was aiming for. I liked the poem Delta Culture (I think because it’s structurally more familiar than most of the book). But, honestly, I just didn’t get a lot of it.

St. Louis Muse: An Anthology of Regional Poetry, by Chris Hayden (ed)

I’m pretty sure I picked this up from a local Little Free Library (or book exchange shelf in a cafe) because I’m always intrigued to explore local aspects of my own (adoptive) city. I enjoyed these poems about a St. Louis not my own. I don’t mean one I don’t claim, just one that I don’t have the invitation to embody. This means that there were aspects to some of what was written about for which I have no reference (either because it’s of the past—the book is 20+ years old and many poems reached farther back—or my own experiential ignorance). In such cases, letting the rhythm and meter flow over me was the most I could appreciate. Others I felt deeply. I’m pleased by the happy little accident this collection turned out to be.

Trip to My Brain: A collection of poems, by Mark Newton

I want to preface my review of this collection by talking about how I came to have it. The author emailed me and asked me to review it. I was annoyed, as I often am. My policies say I am open to offers of femme-authored monster romance. I also wrote a whole blog post, which is linked, saying I’m not interested in books by men anymore. And still, here was a man asking me to read his poetry book. So, either he didn’t bother to read my policies (the audacity to ask for my free labor and not be willing to do even that much), or he read them and decided he was some gilded exception and made a claim on my time anyway (again, the audacity). I don’t recall that I even bothered to respond to his email. Why should I give him more of my time than it took to read his if he can’t be bothered to respect that time in the first place?

But damn, my somewhat obsessive nature that doesn’t allow me to delete books easily. I dropped the collection in my Calibre just because it felt wrong to throw it away. And here, a mere few months later, I read it, basically confirming the functionality of Newton’s rude behavior. Despite all of this, I read it with an open mind. Separation of artists and art and all that jazz.

Here is the review: This is a collection of (mostly) rather long poems. They largely cover what you would expect from a socially/politically/environmentally conscious father in his early fifties. (Unless Newton is not a socially/politically/environmentally conscious father in his early fifties. In which case, bravo, congratulations to Newton on successfully stepping empathetically into the role. That would take this collection from mundane to something more interesting.)

I do not mean to say these poems are bad (IMO, I claim no expertise); they are just somewhat pedestrian. Having said that, I enjoyed them for the most part. I read this directly after a poetry collection that was quite…experimental(?) in its form and function, and I very much appreciated that Newton’s poetry is in recognizable, familiar meter (Or familiar to this Western reader), and I generally understood their intent.

My favorites were Murphy’s Eulogy and XXIV, which is a love letter to literature, I think. I liked these best because they were the ‘something different’ in the collection. My least favorite was Orgasmic Interlude With a Guitar. (I’ve made up these names, BTW. As the poems are numbered and ordered by date—no titles.) The verse wasn’t bad. But the subject was so clichéd as to make me cringe.

All in all, I would not consign this to the literary dustbin, but your love or disdain for it will likely come down to what you do or don’t like (i.e., personal taste). Give it a go.

My Diary, by Annan Jazz Von

I struggled with this collection. I suspect many of these are actually written to be songs. Several words are written phonetically, others with vowels elongated to stretch the word over syllables, there are tails (or in one case, a ‘tial’) that I think are chorus-like refrains, and there are superscript notations, such as x3*. The problem is that nothing in the book actually tells you if they are songs or not, and without clarification, how does one read “U one and true-oo-oox4, true-oo-oo-oox3, tru-oox2, trux2-oox3-ly, y.”? Am I tooting like a train? If so, why repeat the OOs before telling me to repeat them further? Am I saying “x3”? I don’t know. And there was this (or similar) sort of question in almost every poem.

There is a hopefulness to the collection, though, and the About The Author suggests that the author was roughly 19 when this was published. I suspect a lot of these might have been written when they were even younger. I think there is talent, but either a poetry collection is the wrong publishing format (it’s entirely possible the notation style is completely normal in another literary field), or the author needs to learn a bit more about poetry convention—at least enough to tell the reader how to read the work if need be. (I don’t claim to be an expert myself, but I feel like that’s a safe assertion. If you’re going to do something unusual, you need to give your reader some guidance on how to follow.)

All in all, I’m just going to go with saying I wasn’t really able to engage with the meter of a lot of these poems (some I couldn’t even find), but I appreciate some of the subject matter.

Primarily Prose:

Speculate: A Collection of Microlit, by Eugen Bacon & Dominique Hecq

Prose poetry is new to me. I think I like the idea more than the reality. Or maybe a whole book of it is just too much, even if I broke it into snippets and read it over weeks. I liked some of these call-and-response pairings more than others, and I just didn’t get quite a lot of them. All in all, I’m glad to have tried something new. But it’s no new favorite or anything.

Love Voltaire Us Apart: A Philosopher’s Guide to Relationships, by Julia Edelman

I won this somewhere along the way, though I don’t now remember where. I’m sure it’s very witty (and pithy). But having not actually studied philosophy, I’m afraid most of it just went over my head. I tried, though.

Morningstar: Growing Up with Books, by Ann Hood

Meh, it’s a love letter to literature, that’s for sure, and I can appreciate that. But the whole thing has a strong sense of re-remembering to it. I’m sure the books Hood discusses were meaningful to her in her youth. But she describes the importance of books to her 6-year-old self in terms and with the depth of adult understanding. By the time I reached the end, it all felt artificial, gimmicky, and pretentious.

Another Fine Mess, Pope Brock

I read this, one essay a day over a week and a half, and enjoyed it more than expected. It works well as a book you take small bites of.

Sacrastic Parenting Books (the only type I’m ever attracted to):

Sh*tty Mom: The Parenting Guide for the Rest of Us, by Laurie Kilmartin, Karen Moline, Alicia Ybarbo, & Mary Ann Zoellner

Meh. I mean, I see the humor in it, obviously, but the whole thing is just kind of pedestrian.

Only Dead on the Inside: A Parent’s Guide to Surviving the Zombie Apocalypse, by James Breakwell

Irreverent and humorous, just as promised. But the joke got stale before I reached the end.

Mumlife: Witty & Pretty Musings on (the Truth about) Motherhood, by Paula Kuka

This was a cute little depiction of what it is like to be a new mom, minus the mystical myth of motherhood that tells us all that it is the only thing that could ever fulfill us (and it is all we need to be fulfilled). It’s still a fairly sanitized version of Hot Mess Mom, and “I love my kids more than anything” is still the theme. So, it’s not that far removed, but it is far enough to make it appreciable.

 

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Book Review: Waking the Dragon, by Juliette Cross

I am not 100% sure, but I believe I bought my copy of Juliette CrossWaking the Dragon during an online author signing event.

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The Gladium Province is on the verge of civil unrest as humans and Morgons, the dragon-hybrid race, clash once more. But amid disorder can also arise passion.

When the bodies of three human women are discovered in Morgon territory—with the DNA of several Morgon men on the victims—it’s just a matter of time before civil unrest hits the Province. But for ambitious reporter Moira Cade, it’s more than just a story, and it may mean risking her own life.

Descending into the dark underworld of Morgon society, Moira is paired with Kol Moonring, Captain of the Morgon Guard, for her protection. Fiercely independent, Moira bristles at his dominance, and defies his will at every turn. Yet resistance proves futile when passion flares between them, awakening powerful emotions within both, body and soul. But as the killings continue, can their fiery newfound bond survive an even greater evil-one that threatens all of humanity, Morgonkind, and Moira’s very soul?…

my review

Honestly, I wanted to like this a lot more than I did. I liked the idea of it, but there were just so many ways the author took an idea I liked in a direction that I didn’t like, that in the end, I finished the book feeling dissatisfied. But before I get into a litany of things I did not like, I’ll say the writing is fine. The book is perfectly readable. Most of this comes down to personal preference.

First, the female main character is an early twenties university student. She’s the editor of the SCHOOL NEWSPAPER, and for this newspaper, she is investigating a triple (plus) murder. Nothing in that works for me. The gravitas of basically going undercover to catch a murderer “for the story” does not match the abilities or expectations of a university journalism student. Honestly, everything about this would have worked better if Moira had been older and had been working a real job in which she was experienced and vested.

Second, this book is steeped in rape. There is no actual rape on-page, thank goodness. But the whole plot is about rape in a way that permieates every page. It just wasn’t necessary. I’m not talking trigger warnings or anything, because, again, no on-page rape. But I call such use of rape as a plot device the lowest of low hanging plot fruit. Which, to my mind, makes it LAZY PLOTTING. There are a million more interesting ways to put a female character in a position to depend on her male romantic lead.

Third, I don’t think the book would pass the Bechtel test. And if it does, it’s slimly. But more importantly, every woman who isn’t being set up to be a dragon mate eventually is vapid and unpleasant in all the ways women are so often poorly represented. There is no depth to them. This is the patriarchy’s version of women and borders on misogyny in its repetition (especially in books written for and by women).

Fourth, I don’t know Cross’s religious position, but I’d guess she is either a fundamentalist Christian, has internalized their worldview, or is writing to that market. Because this book is everything fundamentalists want represented in a relationship. You’ve got all the male headship (fathers, brothers, bosses, husbands, brother-in-laws) but no women in authority. These men have all the power in every situation in the book, especially in the home, and all the women give deference to them. (Gracious submission, anyone?) Just about the most important decision a woman makes is the dinner menu (and she gets it wrong). The romance here is pretty much just Moira accepting Kol’s headship.

Now, I don’t read paranormal romance for the feminist takes, and can usually turn off my tendency to look at things through the critical lens of feminism. But this book is especially explicit in its anti-feminist leanings. Cross literally constructs Moira’s “feminist ideals”, “female stubbornness”, career dreams, etc, as a foil and impediment to a relationship. She has to choose. The reader is literally asked to consider (as Moira asks herself) if she hasn’t used her feminism to build a wall between herself and the possibility of love. Then, Moira states she doesn’t want her dream (career, independence, feminism, etc) anymore; Kol is the dream now. This is not a book that happens to fail a critical feminist critique. (So much of the romance genre does, and I still manage to enjoy it, even if I acknowledge it.) This is an anti-feminist book disguised as romance…or using romance to perpetuate its anti-feminist (maybe fundamentalist) agenda. That’s a big difference. And if the author didn’t do it on purpose, there are definite questions to be asked.

Fifth, the fact that the super-advanced human and Morgan law enforcement agencies (two of waking the dragon photothem) had to depend on an early 20s journalism student to solve the case is ridiculous in general. But I’d go along with it for the plot, except that they literally had all the information to solve the case without her involvement. Literally, the only way they could have not solved the case with the information they already had was to have not opened a case at all.

I could go on, but I don’t want to get more nit-picky than I am already being. This didn’t work for me for a myriad of reasons. But I’ll acknowledge that most of them are personal preferences, so experiences may vary.


Other Reviews:

Review: Waking the Dragon by Juliette Cross

ARC Review: Waking the Dragon (Vale of Stars #1) by Juliette Cross

 

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Book Review: Timeless, Boundless, Relentless – by R.A. Salvatore

This year, I’ve set a goal to read books from my physical shelves. I have a horrid habit of getting a book, even one I’m excited to read, then putting it on the shelf for later, only to forget about it. My shelves are overflowing (literally, stacks on the floor). So, in order to read R.A. Salvatore‘s Boundless, which I won a few years back, I borrowed Timeless and Relentless from the library. I reviewed them individually as I finished them.

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Synopsis:

Centuries ago, in the city of Menzoberranzan, the City of Spiders, the City of Drow, nestled deep in the unmerciful Underdark of Toril, a young weapon master earned a reputation far above his station or that of his poor house.

The greater nobles watched him, and one matron, in particular, decided to take him as her own. She connived with rival great houses to secure her prize, but that prize was caught for her by another, who came to quite enjoy the weapon master.

This was the beginning of the friendship between Zaknafein and Jarlaxle, and the coupling of Matron Malice and the weapon master who would sire Drizzt Do’Urden.

R. A. Salvatore reveals the Underdark anew through the eyes of Zaknafein and Jarlaxle—an introduction to the darkness that offers a fresh view of the opportunities to be found in the shadows and an intriguing prelude to the intriguing escapes that lie ahead in the modern-day Forgotten Realms. Here, a father and his son are reunited and embark on adventures that parallel the trials of centuries long past as the friends of old are joined by Drizzt, Hero of the North, trained by Grandmaster Kane in the ways of the monk.

But the scourge of the dangerous Lolth’s ambitions remain, and demons have been foisted on the unwitting of the surface. The resulting chaos and war will prove to be the greatest challenge for all three.

my review

Timeless

Meh, I think there are circumstances under which I might have been more impressed with this than I was. For one, if I’d read it when I was younger. Two, if I’d initially realized that though it is the first in a series, it is, in fact, the first in a spin-off series, the original of which is currently at 30+ books. Unfortunately, I’m no longer a teen who is satisfied with a laundry list of cool creatures and extended sword fights, and the book barely stands alone.

Ultimately, this whole book felt both like the 31st book in a series I hadn’t read (with a million characters, event references, place names, etc.) and like an extended prologue. The plot doesn’t really become apparent until about the last 30 pages. Everything before that is backstory and endless character introductions. All that to say, I was really pretty bored, even if I did like the characters…or as much of the characters as you get to know. You’re clearly supposed to already know and love them before picking this book up.

Boundless

Considering I have not read the previous 30-odd books in the Drizzt series and picked up this spin-off series hoping it stands alone enough to follow, I enjoyed this second book significantly more than the first. I still feel like there are a million characters I don’t know (and none I’m really getting to know), and equally as many confusing past events mentioned. But I’m finally invested enough in the plot not to be dreading reading book three.

Relentless

This ended well and, thus, ended the series well. I think I just don’t have the patience for endless battle scenes anymore, and, as with the previous books in the series, there are just too many characters I felt barely connected to. Honestly, by the end, though I know Zak is supposed to be the main character…or the book is about Zak’s resurrection, anyway, I couldn’t tell. There are so many character POVs and so many plots in so many places, and it wasn’t even Zak who did the most important things at the end to save the day, so no one bubbled to the top as the primary one. The collective result was that I was borderline bored throughout.

Also, throughout the book (and trilogy, and probably the whole Drizzt series, I suspect) there’s a pretty clear women-in-power=evil, men=good (or victim) thing going on. Yes, I recognize Salvatore may be purposefully subverting tropes in this. But it started to feel a little misogynistic after a while. Made me think he probably doesn’t like women very much in real life. (Of course, you can’t judge an author on what happens in fiction, but it still left me with a poor taste in my mouth.)

All in all, I don’t regret reading this; the world is vivid and clearly well established, as you would expect from a 30+ book interconnecting collection of series. And there were some interesting explorations of religion, morality, and mortality. But I’m also glad to be finished and moving on.

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Other Reviews:

Robin Knabel: Salvatore

TL Branson: Salvatore