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Book Review: Portrait of a Witch Undone, by K.S. Shay

I received a copy of K.S. Shay‘s Portrait of a Witch Undone from Between the Chapters book club.

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Once, Maeve Ryan was the strongest witch of her generation. But Maeve messed up a spell to contact the Lady of the Fens, an eerie Revenant who lures the unwary to their deaths in the brackish marshlands of the North Shore. Maeve destroyed her reputation, hurt her best friend Ash, and tainted herself with unbound, wild magic that transforms witches into insane Revenants.

With unbound power eating away at Maeve’s mind, all she wants is to get rid of her magic. Forever. But Ash’s research into how the spell went awry leads in an unexpected direction: the Isabella Stewart Gardner Museum, and a link between the Lady and a decades-old art theft worth $500 million. When Ash disappears through a stolen painting’s empty frame, Maeve has to follow.

Inside is the Other Marsh, a haunting, deadly realm where only the Lady’s rules apply. Within this half-world lie secrets about North Shore’s history, Maeve’s failure, and the fate of the masterpieces that disappeared over three decades ago. But as Maeve fights toward the truth, she risks her friendship, her coven, and her life against enemies hiding in plain sight.

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I’m always a little wary of jumping into a New Adult book. Sometimes they swerve a little too far into the ‘new’ adult and end up feeling YA. I didn’t get that too badly with Portrait of a Witch Undone, though I did a bit. I generally enjoyed it. I really like the main character, Maeve. She had a great ‘never say die’ attitude, even against towering odds. Pretty much everyone else felt a little underdeveloped, though. This isn’t to suggest I didn’t like them, but I never felt I knew them well. This is especially true of the love interest. I saw the romance subplot coming, but I don’t feel it’s particularly well developed. The coven leadership (and their obfuscations) felt similarly anchorless. But the writing itself is lyrical, grounded in place and time to a degree that the atmosphere really comes through, the cast is diverse, and the whole thing wraps up nicely.
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Book Review: The Once and Future Queen, by Paula Lafferty

I received an ARC copy of Paula Lafferty‘s The Once and Future Queen from Between the Chapters Book Club.

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22-year-old Vera is at a waiting tables, grieving her previous relationship, and jogging aimlessly each morning as if toward an uncertain future. Then an odd man shows up at her workplace, insisting that she was once the legendary Queen Guinevere of Camelot, and that her lost memories hold the key to changing both the past and the present. Somehow, it all feels like the direction she’s been looking for. But when she asks the mysterious man to tell her more about Lancelot, Arthur, and a faithless queen, he can only say that much of what she’s heard about Camelot is wrong. The truth, he claims, is something she must see for herself.

After jumping through a portal in Glastonbury’s historic center, Vera is not prepared for what she finds. Magic is everywhere, but a curse on the kingdom means it dwindles every day. She has no idea how to perform a queen’s duties. Her fast friendship with Lancelot sets gossip flowing, and the stranger she must call “husband” often refuses to meet her eye. Arthur is a cold, forbidding, and, while angry to her face, keeps leaving secret tokens of tenderness in her chambers. Worst of all, Vera’s memories—and the answers locked within them—show no signs of returning. If Vera is truly destined to save Camelot, she’ll have to trust her instincts. And her king will have to trust her . . .

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The Once and Future Queen is basically a time-traveling isekai or portal fantasy where a modern-day Guinevere leaps back to Camelot, Arthur, Merlin, and all the knights of the to-be round table. It has a lot going for it. Guinevere has a good heart and a genuine desire to right past wrongs. Arthur is every bit as noble as would be expected. Lancelot is rogueish and charming. Merlin is mysterious, Camelot itself hopeful in its infancy, if still smarting from the war.

I liked a lot of the characters. Lancelot and Gawain, especially. But I also hoped for something less YA/NA and therefore more interesting. A lot of the book is just slice-of-life stuff. Characters play and eat, sleep and travel. I was, frankly, bored for a lot of it. Plus, I found that Guinevere simply wasn’t very important in the grand scheme of things. She didn’t actually do much that had any significant effect and wasn’t even necessary to the eventual solution to the magic problem.

The cliffhanger does have me curious what might happen next and how it all might work out. But the boredom left me not invested enough to rush right out to see if there is a book two yet.

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Book Review: Once & Future duology, by Amy Rose Capetta & Cori McCarthy

I’ve had Sword in the Stars (by Amy Rose Capetta & Cori McCarthy*) on my bookshelf for a while. I think someone put it in the little free library. I borrowed Once & Future from the public library so that I could read the duology together.

*Side note, I’ve seen the authors’ names spelled differently. So, I’ve done the best I can here by going by what is on these covers.

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Once and Future King as a teenage girl — and she has a universe to save.
I’ve been chased my whole life. As a fugitive refugee in the territory controlled by the tyrannical Mercer corporation, I’ve always had to hide who I am. Until I found Excalibur.

Now I’m done hiding.

My name is Ari Helix. I have a magic sword, a cranky wizard, and a revolution to start.

When Ari crash-lands on Old Earth and pulls a magic sword from its ancient resting place, she is revealed to be the newest reincarnation of King Arthur. Then she meets Merlin, who has aged backward over the centuries into a teenager, and together they must break the curse that keeps Arthur coming back. Their quest? Defeat the cruel, oppressive government and bring peace and equality to all humankind.

No pressure.

Reviews:

Once & Future:
My experience with this book was very up and down. I loved the racially diverse, queer/gender queer, gender-bent retelling of ‘King’ Arthur and their knights in space aspect of the book, and I found the banter really funny. But…and I hope I can say this in a way that doesn’t come off horribly. The humour aspect got stale after a while, and the constant reminder of the queering of the story became overly heavy-handed.

Never is there a knight who happens to be bi, or non-binary, etc., even after we’ve been told. ALWAYS it is a cisgender or gay who happens to be a knight, if that makes sense. After a while, it felt self-congratulatory on the part of the authors; see how with-it we are?! We left no one out. Which is great on one hand, but it just…well, it left very little room for the characters to be anything else.

Here’s the pretty gay one. Here’s the strapping cisgendered, heterosexual one. Here’s the hip non-binary, disabled one. Here is the asexual one. Here are the lesbians and the neurodivergent one. Look at all the different family structures they came from, lesbian moms, happy heterosexuals, adoptions, abandonments, they’re all represented! After a while, even their names muddle, but never their identity or form of self-expression. I wanted so much more for all of them than to be an identity placeholder.

So, I loved the book in the beginning, flagged through the middle, such that I wasn’t sure I’d continue to the second (even as it sat on my coffee table), and then came back around to enjoying the ending. I will read the second one, I think, but I’m not going into it with anywhere near as high hopes as I did the first.

Sword in the Stars:
I enjoyed this second book more than the first because the twistiness of time added an interesting dimension that the first lacked. I do, kind of, feel the story would have held together a little better if the characters had been in their 20s, rather than teens. But all in all, it wrapped up nicely, and I appreciated the meta-ness of the last few chapters, as well as what I have decided is a little bit of an easter egg relating to the state of America in 2020 when the book was published.

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Steph’s Story Space: Once & Future