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born of metal

Book Review: Born of Metal (Rings of the Inconquo #1), by A.L. Knorr & A.D. Schneider

I received an Audible code for a free copy of Born of Metal, by A.L. Knorr and A.D. Schneider.

born of metal

Her family is all that matters, too bad they may be the death of her…

Ibby’s parents gave up everything for a chance at a better life. So, after a terrible accident leaves her alone in London, Ibby works her internship at the British Museum and goes to her classes to make them proud.

She hopes to one day bring her uncle, her only living relative, to the UK. Family is what matters. But, when Ibby finds a hidden artifact and encounters a mysterious stranger in the bowels of the museum, she learns that its her lineage, the very origins of her family, that will put everything at risk. That, and metal is starting to do some pretty bizarre things around Ibby.

A powerful artifact, a secret society, an ancient evil. Can Ibby embrace her destiny as Inconquo guardian before an ages-old demon is unleashed on London?

If you love strong female characters and millennia old secrets, you’ll love the origin story of Ibukun Bashir, metal elemental. Welcome to the world of the Inconquo.

my review

I thought this was a middle-of-the-road enjoyable read (or listen, rather). I liked Ibby. I liked the immigration aspect of her character. I liked the idea of the ability to control metal. I liked her self-sufficiency and smarts. However, I never felt particularly immersed in the world. This may be because the book is a spin-off from another series (which I didn’t know when I decided to listen to it). It may be because the book is all running here, being attacked there. It never settles enough for the reader to catch a breath and start caring. Plus, there’s a pretty big deus ex machina moment toward the end.

I see several people in the reviews complaining about the narrator. I had little problem with her. I thought she was a little dry with some characters (the demon, for example), but was mostly fine. I’d listen to her again.

born of metal

Tribari Freedom Chronicles

Book Reviews: Tribari Freedom Chronicles, by Rachel Ford

I picked up freebie Audible codes for Rachel Ford‘s Tribari Freedom Chronicles somewhere around the internet.


The Tribari Freedom Chronicles


catalyst rachel fordCatalyst: For a week, Brek Trigan has left behind the frigid nights and icy days of life on the mining colony he calls home. He’s on holiday to his ancestral planet, and he finds a sparkling, welcoming world of riches and warmth.

But the longer he remains, the more he begins to see cracks in the glistening façade. When civil unrest erupts, Brek’s plans for a peaceful getaway are dashed. Suddenly he’s drawn into a conflict that will change the fate of his people, whether he wants to be or no

Review:

An easily readable, but fairly predictable short story illustrating the evils of capitalism and corporatism. When I finished it, I was curious if it would tie into the rest of the series or if it would be a stand-alone. As it turns out, it does tie it, FYI.


uprisingUprising: A daughter of Grand Contributors. The wife of a reformer. A woman caught between worlds.

Nikia Idan was raised in the glimmering spheres of society’s elite, but she traded it all for the love of a man who wants to change the Tribari empire. Her new reality is harsher than she ever imagined it could be.

When her husband’s push for reform is met with brutal violence, her worlds will collide with a force that will either break her – or the system that brought her to the point of breaking.

Review:

Soooooo, this is basically Black Lives Matter in space. As I see it, the Tribari represent black Americans, Grel the protest organizers, Nikia and her parents the ‘nice white people,’ her brother and the other Contributors the rest of white America, the Protectors the police, Elgan and his crew the National Guard (or the ones we wish we had). And while one could argue this represents the generalized fight for social justice and reform, rather than a specific set of events, written in 2019 I can only truly believe the book’s plot is drawn from widely the reported  Black Lives Matter movements. The events of the book aren’t just about oppression and fighting against it, they could literally have been lifted from recent newspapers. It’s all very familiar.

Placing real events in fictional settings can often be an effective way to make a point, bringing people into the lesson. Make a parable of it, if you will. Ford certainly wouldn’t be the first to do it. But I also have to admit that I found it a little tactless to trawl something so recent (current), and that many are STILL hurting from to craft a story. Especially since the heroes here seem to be the ‘nice white lady’ and a national guardsman. (I mean, they’re not actually white. They’re blue-blooded, multi-colored eyed aliens on a distant planet. But they still represent recognizable factions.) So, it feels a little like white savior-ism to top it all off.

I went back and forwards about whether to make this point at all. I support the BLM movements and appreciate anything that might help readers understand the social situation in America. (And I acknowledge the possibility that I’m simply wrong in my assertion.) But it comes down to who gets to profit off of particular stories, if in fact this is based on the recent events in American policing and governance. I don’t feel I’m the person to make such a determination (that would be stepping far outside my own lane), but I also didn’t want to leave out what was, in fact, my primary impression while listening to the book (how familiar it all felt). So, all I’m doing here is noting the similarities between the book and recent(ish) events, and I’ll let others make their own judgement.

None of the above was helped by the fact that the Tribari are supposed to be aliens. They have their own gods and religions, humanoid but not human bodies (again, they’re blue, have blue blood and eyes that change colors depending on moods), different monetary systems, etc. But so much of the world building is just cut and paste from real life. Oil is still paramount, oligarchies still rule, oppression takes the same recognizable forms, public treatment of abortion and abortion clinics are identical, mores feel familiar, as does language. At one point someone yells “Amen” to agree with a speaker. So much familiarity in what is supposed to be alien only reinforced my feeling that this is a thinly veiled version of reality.

I’m hoping the next book moves closer to fiction and the source material a little less apparent. Outside that, I like the characters, the writing is fine and the narrator is doing a good job.


liberation rachel fordLiberation: A mutineer fleet commander. An abandoned miner. A reformer’s widow. A convicted Protector.

Four destinies. One empire.

From the frozen prison planets to the glistening streets of Central, corruption and cruelty is tearing the Tribari Empire apart. Four unlikely heroes find themselves on a collision course as they work to save their worlds. If they can’t find a way to bridge their differences, there may be no empire left to protect.

Review:

I both liked this book better than the previous one and thought it naive in the extreme. I also felt my initial ‘this is just reality with a filter’ even more strongly than before. Here we moved away from the persecution of the people and on to the revolution. However, it has to be the most limpid revolution ever. The ‘nice white lady’ (as I deemed Nikia in my previous review) makes some rousing speeches, goes about being as pure and innocent as snow, and inspires everyone with her mere presence. Then, sets out to create a perfect socialist utopia that even Bernie Sanders would sign off on. Thus she saves all the poor oppressed people, while somehow still maintaining that her elitist ruling-class family is somehow innocent in it all. (It’s all very familiar.)

Do I sound like I’m rolling my eyes? I was rolling my eyes. I don’t know why it irritates me so much. I think it’s just that it feels discordant, close to real life, but off. Like it’s experienced a phase-shift or something. Or maybe it’s just that it feels like a rip off to see someone take the same social reforms many today would like to see enacted and paint them across science fiction as something new and original. How much creativity does that take?

Beyond my irritation at the mining of present day media for this fictional account, the writing is pretty solid. The editing seems strong (as well as I can tell in an audio book), and the narrator is still doing a good job.


absolution rachel fordAbsolution: New wars and old conflicts. An empire reborn from blood and ash.

Nikia Idan led an uprising that liberated the Tribari people. Brek Trigan saved his colony from starvation. Captain Drake Elgin protected the citizens of Central from loyalist forces. The worst was supposed to be behind them.

When a loyalist fleet appears in Tribari airspace, the tenuous alliance between military and parliament is strained to the point of breaking. Meanwhile, a rogue governor’s quest for independence will put the empire’s promise of freedom to the test.

The decisions of these few will change the fate of many.

Review:

I think this was my favorite of the seriesall the different plot arcs coming together, a little light, sweet romance cropping up, and the social/political upheaval coming to it’s expected conclusion. I don’t think anyone will be surprised by the ending. Nor would they find it particularly exciting. But it is satisfying in it’s way. The writing was clean and readable (or listenable, since I had and audio version), as it has been throughout the series, and Megan Green did a good job with the narration.

I was still irritated by how close to the real world this alien culture is. Someone jokes about not running marathons, someone else gets on one knee with a ring to propose marriage, wives still take husbands names, etc. It’s all just so very familiar for what is supposed to be patently alien. I guess this could be humans far enough in the future to have genetically changed, but that’s not really even hinted at. There is a ‘original home planet,’ so I guess it’s possible. But the hints are pretty weak if that is supposed to be the case. All in all, I didn’t hate it, but I’m not disappointed to be finished either. 


Tribari Freedom Chronicles

wings of fire

Book Review: Wings of Fire, by Stephanie Mirro

I received a free Audible credit for a copy of Wings of Fire, by Stephanie Mirro.
wings of fire

I wasn’t always the bad guy…

Once upon a time, I was simply Veronica Neill: daughter, sister, phoenix. But now I’m all alone, and life as the Falcon—an avian shifter and acquirer of fantastical things—is dangerously sexy and fun.

Some might even call me a thief, just never to my face.

But when my latest acquisition is stolen before I arrive and a gruesome murder is blamed on me, I’ve got a choice to make: 1) get taken in by the hotter-than-hell agent sent by the Death Enforcement Agency and let them charge me with a crime I didn’t commit, or 2) wait for my bloodsucking client to realize I’ve failed at the job he hired me for.

I don’t like either door, so I’ll take the window instead: track down the real killer and clear my name.

If I don’t solve this murder, and fast, then I might just be facing a lifetime in a grim prison—or worse, a lifetime of servitude to the man who hired me, a man who’s turning out to be more dangerous than I realized. And my kind lives for a very long time.

my review

I thought this was entertaining, but a little on the shallow side. Veronica tells us she’s badass because she’s trained her whole life to be. But you don’t really feel it. It’s just something we’re told and pops up conveniently when needed. Need weapons…oh look, she has a secret stash. Need to get around a security issue…oh look, her BFF is a hacker genius. Need to fight demons…oh look, she happens to have a demon fighting sword. Need to fight vampires…oh look she happens to have wood filled bullets. But nothing about her feels like a hardened, trained warrior or someone who has had to live the sort of life that would require it.

I liked the ‘love’ interest well enough, but he’s a cardboard cutout with the personality to match. The villain is evil for the most cliched reasons ever. I bet if I told you their gender alone, you’d be able to guess their motiviations. And I’d figured out the twist at the end very early one.

And lastly, on a purely personal pet-peeve sort of level, “Wings of Fire: A Kickass Urban Fantasy With Romance (The Last Phoenix, Book 1)” is pretentious. What the hell is that “A Kickass Urban Fantasy With Romance?” It’s not part of the title. That’s not where you’d put a tag line. It’s just this random assertion in an unexpected place.

I know that all sounds negative, and certainly the book could have been less cotton-candy like, but I did enjoy it for the mere escapism of it.

wings of fire stephanie mirro