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Book Review: The Wildborn, by Perri Torani

I’m not entirely sure how I ended up with a copy of Perri Torani‘s The Wildborn. I have no memory of signing up for an ARC (that doesn’t mean I didn’t; it just means I don’t remember if I did), and the Bookfunnel link was sent to my normal email (not my blog email), which isn’t the one I would have used. It was only luck that I saw it at all. I get A LOT of newsletters and such. Things regularly get missed.

Regardless, confused as I might have been, it hit my TBR at just the right moment, grabbed my attention (partly because of the confusion), and I decided to give it a read. (I then managed to accidentally log in to review it on the same day Bookfunnel sent the “It’s time to review The Wildborn (eARC)” email, which I think might be release day.) The stars were really aligned for Torani on this one.

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To walk the path of a morazir, I will exist in three states of being:

Untouched.

Untaken.

Unconquered.

Airik, a battle-scarred warrior serving the cruel intergalactic empire of the Veynari, craves silence from the nightmares tormenting his mind. But while on post to decommission a failed experiment of a planet, a rogue human spacecraft crashes, and a reckless decision leaves him stranded—entangled with a woman he never should have saved.

Nora wakes light-years from Earth, broken in body and spirit, at the mercy of an alien soldier who refuses to let her die. Devastatingly beautiful, terrifyingly competent, and bound by a warrior’s oath that permits touch only to destroy, he’s the reluctant guardian angel she neither wants nor believes she deserves.

Trapped together, they’re forced to navigate a brutal landscape, vicious beasts, and the deadly remnants of an abandoned world. Duty demands Airik’s cold indifference. Yet Nora sparks something deliciously alive—and entirely forbidden—within him. What begins as necessity ignites a primal hunger: scorching, consuming, and impossible to resist.

But even if they survive, the Veynari—ever present and ruthless—won’t allow its warriors weakness like love. For Airik and Nora to be together, they must risk everything.

my review

I generally enjoyed this. If you like a male lead that falls first, falls hard, and PINES, The Wildborn is for you. Airik doesn’t wear his heart on his sleeve. He rips it out—all bloody and desperate—and shows it to you. I adored him.

Nora…Nora not so much. I mean, she’s sweet, kind, and takes to her unexpected situation with aplomb. But she’s also completely useless. And while Airik is fine with that, I wanted so much more from her. I didn’t dislike her. I just found her a little bit of a cardboard cutout of the emotionally scarred damsel in distress. (Predictably, the cause of her emotional scars is also ridiculously not worthy of her self-blame and hatred.)

The writing itself is clean and easy to read. However, at 600+ pages, the book is far too long. Airik and Nora spend too much time stalling before anything significant happens, and I 100% did not need the previous generation’s chapter at the beginning. All in all, however, I’d likely read book two to see where the overarching plotline goes and which of the two potential matches comes next.
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Book Review: Knight’s Prize, by Sarah McKerrigan

I’ve had a copy of Sarah McKerrigan’s (aka Glynnis Campbell) Knight’s Prize on my shelf for a while. I’m fairly sure I won it, since it is signed.

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THE WARRIOR MAIDS OF RIVENLOCH…

Damsels in shining armor…riding to the rescue!

Deirdre, Helena, and Miriel, three kick-arse Scots wenches, aren’t about to become any man’s chattel, until they meet heroes who are strong enough to tame their wild ways and worthy enough to win their wayward hearts.

Miriel of Rivenloch may not have the killer instincts of her older sisters, but she’s keeping a dangerous secret. She knows more than she’s letting on about the mysterious Shadow, the forest outlaw who robs from the rich and gives to the poor. And when devil-may-care mercenary Sir Rand la Nuit, hot on the trail of The Shadow, claims to be in love with Miriel, she knows he’s hiding something, too. It’s a battle of wits as they race to uncover each other’s secrets before their make-believe romance takes on a life of its own.

my review

This was a pretty big “meh” for me. The writing is fine, though all the words like ” twas ” got on my nerves. It felt like a gimmick that got old fast. And I thought that if I had to read the word “varlet” one more time, I might scream. Mostly, I was basically bored the whole time. There simply isn’t enough to the plot/story for me. I didn’t even really care about Miriel and Rand’s romance. I found them each individually tolerable, but together they were milquetoast to the extreme. Worse, milquetoast with ‘banter’ that just felt slightly skeevy. But I think my biggest complaint was that the reader is repeatedly told how capable and skilled Miriel is, yet shown almost none of it. In fact, she came across as incredibly inept, giving herself away in stupid ways over and over and over again. Thus, I had to wonder how stupid Rand was not to figure it out…or just how sexist, since that’s basically what it came down to. So, all in all, probably a winner for other readers, but not for me.

Side note: I wonder if the author realizes that the sentence in the blurb that says, “Deirdre, Helena, and Miriel, three kick-arse Scots wenches, aren’t about to become any man’s chattel, until they meet heroes who are strong enough to tame their wild ways and worthy enough to win their wayward hearts,” implies pretty strongly that the women do become chattel. I mean, it’s not all that inaccurate, but it’s sure not what I’m looking for in a romance.

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All About Romance: Knight’s Prize

 

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Book Review: Aspen Pack #1-2, by Carrie Ann Ryan

I’m fairly sure I picked up Etched in Honor (by Carrie Ann Ryan) as an Amazon freebie. I read it on my Kindle. Hunted in Darkness, however, I won at some point.

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About Etched in Honor:

I thought I’d lost my fated mate until he shows up years later. Only with no memory of me. Or us.

As Beta of the Aspen Pack, I was forced to watch our former Alpha turn to dark magic and destroy the bonds of our people.

I nearly died trying to save us, but I broke the biggest taboo: I told the others that cat shifters existed and almost lost everything in return.

Now we have a new Alpha, a new future, and a dangerous and mysterious enemy threatening our stable balance. And a new Tracker.

The man who looks like my dead mate.

My Review:

Honestly, this just wasn’t very good. The writing is super sloppy and very repetitive. I seriously think that if everything that was said more than once was said a single time, the whole 300-page book would literally be 25 pages long. The copy-editing might be fine, but a content editor would make a grand difference here.

The thing is, though, that it has interesting characters, a world with a lot of potential, and an intriguing plot idea and romantic pairing. But it is extremely obvious that this is a spin-off, and so many characters are introduced from other books (even up to the end), and important past events are mentioned that at no point did I feel settled into this plot. The whole thing feels like a protracted prologue. As if it were a recap reminding readers of what happened before getting into a new story, when this is supposed to be the new story. The bad writing I might have forgiven. But combined with being too enmeshed in other series to stand on its own, it was more than I could forgive.

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About Hunted in Darkness:

I knew I wanted her the first time I saw her. Only problem? She can’t be my mate.

I’m a son of a traitor and former Alpha and I know it’s the legacy people see.

But I must be the Alpha of my Pack and protect them from the new threat to our world: Vampires.

Valac and the others are still in the shadows, and we must find their lairs before we lose more than we already have.

Only every time the enemy attacks, Skye puts herself in jeopardy. I’m the dominant wolf, but she’s the one with the most to lose.

She’s the Pack princess. The daughter of legends.

And I know she’s not my mate.

But I want her. I need her. And now I must convince my wolf. Or break the most sacred rules of the moon goddess.

Again.

My Review:

I think Carrie Ann Ryan’s books just aren’t for me. I read this, despite disliking book one, because I hoped the series was suffering first-book syndrome and it would get better. It did not. What’s more, I disliked Hunted in Darkness for much the same reasons I disliked Etched in Honor. The writing just isn’t very good. It is almost entirely dialogue or internal monologue with very little description. There are far, far, far too many references to other books, characters, story lines, etc. I never felt like I could sink into this story because I was so often reminded I was missing others. The book-level romance suffers from artificial obstacles, while the series-level arc moves very little, and calling the villains caricatures is being generous. All in all, to each their own, but I won’t be continuing the series.


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