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Storm Dancer

Book Review of Rayne Hall’s Storm Dancer

I’ve come across Rayne Hall on a number of social media sites. I’m familiar with her as an author, though I don’t actually know her. Her twitter avatar is Dahoud’s face. I’ve always liked the look of it, so based on pretty much just that I grabbed Storm Dancer off of the KDP list when I saw it.

       

(For the record I completely prefer the first version of him, but the second is the one currently on Amazon and probably more accurate to the character.)

Description from Goodreads:

Demon-possessed siege commander, Dahoud, atones for his atrocities by hiding his identity and protecting women from war’s violence – but can he shield the woman he loves from the evil inside him?

Principled weather magician, Merida, brings rain to a parched desert land. When her magical dance rouses more than storms, she needs to overcome her scruples to escape from danger. 

Thrust together, Dahoud and Merida must fight for freedom and survival. But with hatred and betrayal burning in their hearts, how can they rebuild their fragile trust?

Review:
Storm Dancer wasn’t at all what I expected and I was pleasantly surprised. Honestly I just expected a bit of a dark, rape-themed alpha male PNR (but still I read it). It’s a lot more than that. Yes, poor Dahoud is possessed by a djinn focused on the cruel sexual domination of women and he has committed horrible atrocities in the past. But the book is largely focused on his attempt to atone for those sins. He’s tempted constantly, but he’s also trying really really hard to be a good man. He is a seriously flawed anti-hero, and a disciplined soldier, but has to learn to recognise and discipline his subconscious too. Enter Merida. If there is one thing Merida thinks she is, it is disciplined of the mind. While Dahoud is straining to lash his mind down Merida is struggling to accept that maybe she needs to give hers a little more leeway. (Though I have to admit I loved her obsession with symmetry.)

Both Merida and Dahoud find themselves mired in the mind games of a despotic ruler, international politics, war and a complete lack of interpersonal communication. These two managed to go months without speaking to one another, which only served to exacerbate their alienation of each other. My heart went out to Dahoud over and over again, even though with his past one might question if he deserved my sympathy. All in all a well fleshed out story.

It did feel like the book took a long time to get started. The two main characters don’t even meet until 40 or so percent of the way through the book. But all of the world building and political back story that is revealed is useful to know. A few threads seemed to have been left open. What happened to Tarkan for example, but I didn’t really mind. The book was full of serious, dark themes but wasn’t a particularly dark read. It even had a fairly mushy ending. Defiantly glad I picked it up.

Book 1 & 2 of Lori Brighton’s The Hunter Series

I grabbed Lori Brighton‘s PNR The Ghost Hunter from the Amazon KDP list and to my complete surprise remembered that I owned it. Usually if an ebook isn’t lendable I don’t add it to my Kindle list and end up forgetting about it…out of sight, out of mind after all. I don’t particularly care for the cover, but I guess it must have stuck in my mind.

Description from Goodreads:
When Ashley Hunter inherits the Inn where her father mysteriously vanished years ago, she jumps at the chance to finally uncover the truth about his disappearance. But soon after taking ownership of the decrepit building, Ashley realizes she’s in for far more than she bargained. Not only has she inherited answers to many sought-after questions, she’s also inherited spirits, demons and even fallen angels! Then Cristian arrives, a gorgeous man who insists he merely needs a room to rent. She believes him, until one by one her ghosts start disappearing…

As a fallen angel destined for a life of servitude, Cristian Lucius is relegated to protecting earth from unwanted spirits. But he can’t accomplish this daunting task alone. He requires assistance from the very woman who frustrates him as much as she intrigues him. Cristian is determined to ignore his intense attraction for Ashley, and focus on his mission. If they don’t work together, they won’t have a chance in hell of defeating the demon threatening their lives. The problem is getting Ashley to trust him. No easy task, considering Cristian is the very man responsible for her father’s disappearance.

The Ghost Hunter started off well. Crumpled and jet lagged Ashley arrived in England to inherit a decrepit inn from he aunt and find some answers about her father’s disappearance. Life gets complicated after that.

I generally liked Ashley. She had had a hard life and was finally trying to accept herself as is. I can appreciate that. She had an irritating habit of chatting even when endangered though. I wanted to scream at her,”Come on shut up and hide already, or run, or fight, or something, just shut up!” Not that what she often said wasn’t of relevance, but who stands around and chats when a demon is breathing down their neck? She was witty though. She pulled some amusing one liners that I couldn’t help enjoying. 

Christian and his Scottish burr were sexy as they were supposed to be and I liked him too. You have to appreciate a man who tries so hard to do the right thing. But while I get that he was surprised to find himself attracted to Ashley, I honestly think he made the discovery that he loved her 15 times. Blimey! There were a lot of ‘oh how he loved her,’ ‘did she want him as much as he wanted her,’ why couldn’t he get her off his mind,’ etc (or lines of the sort). It did get a little repetitive and a lot of the book was dedicated to it.

Blimey, describes the language in this book perfectly. There were a lot of them, ‘bloody hells,’ shite/arse and other such classic Englishisms. (I know that isn’t really a word, but you know what I mean.) There was also phonetic speech. While this did give the characters character it was really distracting. I mean I had to read the line ‘Yer da’ numerous times before I figured out it meant your dad. It took me a while to remember that ‘ken’ could mean know, so that the line ‘ye ken’ meant you know. Then again “Jaysus, Mary and Joseph” left no question of whether John spoke with an Irish brogue or not. It just sounds right. I guess it is just a think line between some and too much.

All-in-all I liked the book well enough to get the second one. It made me laugh and I liked Devon, so I wanted to know what happens to him.

Description from Goodreads:
Ellie has always been different, from playing with fairies as a child to fighting demons as an adult. She grew up wondering why no one else seemed to notice the oddities of the world that she came into contact with on a daily basis. When she is the only witness of a demon attack and the police suspect her, Ellie skips the country heading to England where she plans to keep a low profile. Everything is going fine, until Devon appears, stumbling around her garden like a drunken fool, and completely naked no less.

Six months ago Devon sacrificed himself to bind the soul of a demon and save the world from certain destruction. Thanks to a spell gone awry, Devon is back. But Devon hasn’t come alone. The very demon he tried to destroy has returned and is wreaking havoc on earth. When Devon meets Ellie, he instantly recognizes another supernatural being. Ellie may just be the only person who is strong enough to destroy the demon, if the demon doesn’t destroy her first.

In one sense I liked Demon Hunter better than Ghost Hunter. I think the writing was better. Not that it was bad in the first one, but I liked it more here. I also liked the juxtaposition of Devon’s Victorian upbringing with his strong warrior nature. But it was his broken, puppy dog moments that made me love him. Ellie’s amazing backbone was a joy. I much prefer a strong heroine to a wimpy one. Plus, the occasion in which she took on more traditionally male romance characteristics (like thinking of Devon as hers) made me smile. I like it when authors play with genre tropes. 

What I didn’t like was the constant and often misplaced descriptions of Devon’s amorousness. Well-nigh half the book was dedicated to explaining how enamoured he was with Ellie. We get it already. It detracted from the rest of the plot and often slowed the action down. I had hoped that if there is to be a third book it would be based on Kipps….I really liked him.

Anyhow, I don’t feel like my time was waisted, but I’m  little relieved that there isn’t another one yet. I liked them enough to read it if there was, but am also not disappointed to be moving on. 

Soul Survivor

Book Review of Rosanna McCoy’s Soul Survivor

Author, Rosanna McCoy, sent me a review copy of Soul Survivor .

Description from Goodreads:
Awakening from a coma, University of New Mexico’s Professor, Grayson Lane, finds himself in a living nightmare. He remembers a delivery truck hitting him while out on a leisurely run, but he has no memory of his near-death experience in ICU or his soul encountering the soul of Sophia Cruz, the woman lying in the hospital bed next to his.

Bewildered by the entanglement of Sophia’s ghost, Grayson seeks the help of University of New Mexico’s parapsychologist, Dr. Prothro. But Grayson is skeptical of Prothro’s explanation, and he does not believe Zuri, his long-time lover, has become too busy with her pottery business to spend time with him.

Zuri is horrified when Grayson reveals the ghost that is possessing his soul to be that of Sophia Cruz, the dead wife of State Senator Domingo Cruz, the predator who is sexually extorting her. Dom is powerful and dangerous, and when Grayson tells her that Prothro suspects the Senator of murdering his wife, she pleads with him to steer clear of Dom.

Desperate, Zuri also turns to Dr. Prothro for help. He enlists Tate Edwards, a PI with a ghost of his own, to help her break free of Dom’s control. But none of them are prepared for the events that unfold when the ghost of Sophia Cruz begins using Grayson to accomplish her revenge on those who have betrayed her

Soul Survivor has ghosts in it, but I wouldn’t call it a ghost story. They play a decidedly secondary role. After a traumatic head injury Grayson Lane can see ghosts, meanwhile his girlfriend Lani can see monsters (and not the supernatural kind). He probably got the better end of that deal.

The book is very well written. Most of the characters are sharp and well defined. I especially like Tate and, though I know it probably makes me a bad person, Spyker. But I had a hard time reading it. This isn’t a happy, happy, joy, joy type of book. Lani is stuck in hell and the reader is forced to ride along side her. Luckily McCoy wasn’t inclined toward titillation and avoided being gratuitous. I don’t think I could have finished it if she had described the details of what we know Lani went through. But she is especially strong and determined to survive.

It has a happy ending of sorts, but I didn’t find the it particularly gratifying. I think that some people will though. Those who are comfortable with the idea that the rewards for a life well led come in the next will stand up and cheer. Those of us who want it here and now and aren’t so sure about the whole heaven thing might feel a little disgruntled. I did, as I often do when strong religious themes are sprung on me unexpectedly. I would have preferred the book without, but suspect the author wouldn’t have cared to write it that way. (But what do I know?)

The cover doesn’t really do it justice. Overlook it. The book is worth reading.