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Book Review: Youngblood, by Sasha Laurens

I received an ARC copy of Youngblood, by Sasha Laurens as part of a book tour for the book. However, that tour was canceled on somewhat short notice. However, I’d already read the book. So, here’s a review.
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High school sucks. Especially for the undead.

Kat Finn and her mother can barely make ends meet living among humans. Like all vampires, they must drink Hema, an expensive synthetic blood substitute, to survive, as nearly all of humanity has been infected by a virus that’s fatal to vampires. Kat isn’t looking forward to an immortal life of barely scraping by, but when she learns she’s been accepted to the Harcote School, a prestigious prep school that’s secretly vampires-only, she knows her fortune is about to change.

Taylor Sanger has grown up in the wealthy vampire world, but she’s tired of its backward, conservative values—especially when it comes to sexuality, since she’s an out-and-proud lesbian. She only has to suffer through a two more years of Harcote before she’s free. But when she discovers her new roommate is Kat Finn, she’s horrified. Because she and Kat used to be best friends, a long time ago, and it didn’t end well.

When Taylor stumbles upon the dead body of a vampire, and Kat makes a shocking discovery in the school’s archives, the two realize that there are deep secrets at Harcote—secrets that link them to the most powerful figures in Vampirdom and to the synthetic blood they all rely on.

my review

I think maybe—like Kat and Galen—I wanted to like this more than I did. The writing is quite readable. (I had an ARC, so I can’t comment on editing.) The idea is interesting, the self-discovery aspect seemed well done, and the characters had potential. But, in the end, neither was particularly likable; the romance is put off too long to feel satisfying, and there’s just a whole subtle sense of ick to the story.

Part of the discomfort is in the blatant -isms of the vampires. And I’ll accept that people raised in eras past might carry some of the attitudes of that past with them. But a lot of it is just baked into the narrative and apparent in the way Kat is such a fair-weather ally. Sure, she notices how few BIPOC students there are, asks Taylor their pronouns, acknowledges various forms of privilege, and throws the use of ‘boys and girls’ at the headmaster derisively, ‘as if non-binary people don’t exist.’ She says all the right things. But she’s perfectly happy to overlook it all for her own social advancement. In a very real sense, that’s the whole point of the plot (if looked at from a different angle than the author presents it to us).

And honestly, the author could have done SO much with that set up. What a chance to show self-reflection and growth in the main character…not to mention commentary on a lot of real-youngblood photoworld allyship. But she doesn’t take the opportunity. The end result is a book that feels like corporate allyship…you know, where they say the right things during June and purchase the right optics (or try to publish the right books), but don’t actually change their policies to protect anyone or improve lives and drop it all come July. So, ick. And bonus ick in a book with two baby-lesbians as the main characters and, one would presume, the primary audience.

All and all, this wasn’t a big winner for me. But I do love the art on the cover. That’s why I picked the book up in the first place.


Other Reviews:

Cloud Lake Literary: Youngblood

 

 

 

 

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Book Review: Rise of the Phoenix, by JL Madore

I picked up a copy of JL. Madore’s Rise of the Phoenix as an Amazon freebie, last year.
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Monsters, Magic, and Mates I never knew existed.

Kia versus power pole isn’t the end I expect—it’s the beginning of… gawd, where do I begin?
Four wildly sexy males. Powers I don’t understand. And the eyes of the fae world on me as the person to unite the severed realms. No pressure.

my review

Amusing enough, but not much more. It’s entertaining but not very deep. The plot is pretty thin, and none of the characters (the males especially) are well-developed. One is such an asshole I don’t know how the author imagines she’ll redeem him, and two are fairly inconsistent in their tone and characterization. It was the book’s general inconsistencies that really threw me though, like someone unbuckling yoga pants.

The book also is guilty of using the cheap attempted rape shtick (and it wasn’t even very well rise of the phoenix photostitched into the plot). I’m not saying a book should never include rape, but I’ve found that far too often, it’s used for cheap tension. More often than not, here included, there are a million better and less over-used and common plot devices to reach for. At this point, I call it the ‘low-hanging fruit’ of plotting. It’s evidence the author took the easiest, least thought about, no-effort path. IT’S LAZY. And is that really how authors want to be seen?

Anyhow, despite how negative this review seems, I’ll read book two (I have 1-5), because I have it and I’m curious to see all the men submit.


Other Reviews:

Rise of the Phoenix by J.L. Madore – A Book Review

 

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Book Review: Gilded Fae, by Erica Reeder

I purchased a Kindle copy of Gilded Fae, by Erica Reeder.
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When a dead faerie lands in her lap, bounty hunter Cy Vanguard knows her life is about to change.

Dandelions. People hate ’em. You know what Cy hates? Faeries in New York City. Sure, it sounds hypocritical since she is one too, but she doesn’t have wings. That means she gets a pass. Court law, not hers. Law or no, her winged compatriots keep popping up everywhere in the city like…well, dandelions. Talk about annoying. Especially when they’re dead.

Add one mouth-watering vampire– the mortal enemy of all faeries– to the slip-and-slide that has become her life and things become leakier than a porcupine’s umbrella. Now, Cy is slapped in the face with the fact that she might be done with faerie, but faerie isn’t done with her. She can’t run anymore. She has to choose. A people who never accepted her? Or a fiery love and the death of everything she knows?

my review

Soooo, I didn’t love this. In fact, I wanted very badly to DNF it based on the characters’ unbelievable stupidity and lack of care or concern for the safety of her people. The only reason I didn’t is that I actually bought the first 3 books in the series at the same time. I wanted to at least finish book 1, so that I can at try book 2 to see if the series improves. But I didn’t enjoy the book and honestly skimmed a lot of the end of it.

The problems are multiple. As I said, the main character is just TSTL. The fact that the author morphed the plot to make it all work out doesn’t change how dangerous and stupid her actions were. I’m talking about taking a stranger and a human who doesn’t know the supernatural exists to investigate a supernatural death, thereby exposing her entire race (and the author never addresses this). And believe me when I say NOTHING in this decision made sense, plot-wise.

She’s also supposed to be a well-trained martial artist, but I don’t think she wins a single fight the whole book. And I’m supposed to believe faeries all have special powers (control of wind, fire, electricity, etc) and they’re not trained to use them defensively (but they learn muay thai)?

Repeatedly, the author would hand us an interesting event (finding out her friend is a werewolf or that her boyfriend is a vampire, for example) and then cut away and never return to the scene. In fact, sometimes we never even saw the character again. The plot meandered and felt anchor-less. I was honestly confused by a lot of it. The love interest’s character development is that he is hot. That’s it in its entirety. And lastly, while I could handle the occasional grammar and punctuation errors, the inconsistencies almost drove me to distraction. (For example: asking to borrow someone’s phone, then digging her own out to make a call. Thinking, ‘How could no one have told me?’ about something, and then the next paragraph saying, ‘The report said…’ about that same thing. Being rescued from a party at home and then her asking, ‘How did you know I was at the club.’ The ‘whole vampires think we’re extinct’ (and comment on it) while vampires are actively using faerie blood as a drug in front of them. Where did she think it came from?)

I am willing to give book two a chance. I read a review saying Sven isn’t in it, so that gives me hope. But if it’s not better than this one, I won’t bother with book 3, let alone the rest of the series.


Other Reviews:

Book Review of Gilded Fae by Erica Reeder