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A Hidden Magic

Book Review of A Hidden Magic (Sentinels #1), by Angela Benedetti

A Hidden MagicI got a copy of Angela Benedetti‘s A Hidden Magic when it was available as a Christmas freebie from the publisher.

Description from Goodreads:
Fey incursions into the mortal world have been on the rise, and Paul MacAllister’s trying to figure out what the king of the local Elven enclave Under the Hill is up to and how to stop it. Rory Ellison was caught up in one of those attacks and nearly killed by a gang of goblins. He doesn’t believe they were real, though, and is resisting anything Paul might say to the contrary. 

Normally Paul would be willing to let Rory go his own way, at least until he’s taken care of more immediate business. But Rory has a particularly rare gift, one the Elven king needs to have under his control in order to carry out his plan. Keeping Rory away from the fey who will use him, to death if necessary, means protecting him night and day, whether Rory agrees or not.

Review:
This was only ok. Having said that…it was ok, which is not to say bad. The book was ok. The writing was fine. The editing was fine. The characters were likeable…all ok. But I still wasn’t blown away by it.

The issue I finished the book with is that nothing of any significance happens in it. It’s not that nothing happens—they put this fire out, put that fire out, defend against this attack, someone gets kidnapped and retrieved, things happen—but nothing of significance happens, nothing that would qualify as a broad, over-arching plot beyond two men meet amongst all this other stuff and kinda like each-other. As a result, I was never grabbed by the book. I liked it ok, but was never hugely invested in it.

Similarly, I liked the characters (the main ones and the side ones) but the reader never gets to know them. There isn’t a lot of character development and they remain shallow throughout the book. Again, I never felt invested in them.

Roughly, the same could be said for world building. All only ok. So, while not a bad book, by any means, also not a great book. It served it’s purpose of entertaining me for a few hours, but not a lot more.

Hard Fall

Book Review of Hard Fall (Deputy Joe #1), by James Buchanan

Hard FallI downloaded a copy of Hard Fall, by James Buchanan, from the publisher when it was available a s a Christmas freebie.

Description from Goodreads:
Deputy Joe Peterson is Mormon and in the closet. Then ex-con Kabe Varghese lands in town on parole. When a tourist falls off the mountain, Joe finds he needs the help of this cliff climbing adrenaline junky to solve the case. Will Kabe tear him apart or does Joe need to fall hard before he can start living?  

Review:

Hmmm, well three stars I guess. It wasn’t bad but I didn’t think it was great either. Mostly, there were certain aspects of it I really appreciated and other aspects that just left me cold.

To start with I liked Joe. He was a good ‘ol boy, for sure, complete with the linguistic characteristics, hunting references and preference for Stetsons and cowboy boots. I liked that he was basically a good man. I really liked his faith and, as it’s instrumental to the plot, how he struggled to bring being a gay man in line with it. Outside of being gay he was a devout Mormon. He didn’t cuss; drink alcohol, or even caffeine. He attended church and paid his tithes without complaint. He appreciated the grandeur of nature and used it as a means to connect with his spirituality and God. He even wore all the church-sanctioned undergarments. (And how did I not know, or not remember maybe, that Mormon’s have their own kind of underwear?) GOOD MAN.

I liked Kabe less, but I didn’t dislike him. Honestly, he felt less substantial, as if he was just there for Joe to interact with. But he served his purpose.

Some of the sex was hot and Joe’s internal dialogue of falling in love was sweet. So, the book isn’t without praiseworthy material.

However, Joe’s drawl got on my nerves at times. Kabe’s refusal to understand Joe’s position and difficulties felt selfish. I got lost in some of the climbing terminology. I cringed over some of the handling of evidence in the case (though other aspects of it were well done). I hated the way Joe called Kabe ‘boy,’ even though I didn’t sense he was supposed to be that much older. It grated like an insult every-time he said it. I thought that the first spanking scene felt like abuse (and the second one not a lot better) and honestly the whole Dom/sub spanking thing came completely out of left field and felt wholly out of place with the rest of the book.

So, in the end, it was a fine read but not something that lit me up in any true fashion. Though, I’m totally stealing the phrase “You’re hats on too tight.” for when people say stupid things. This is worth remembering.

As a side note, Kabe was supposed to have been of Indian descent (dark skinned/haired). So, who’s that white, blondish guy on the cover? I hate when publishers put characters on the front of books and they don’t match those actual characters.

Sleepless

Book Review of Sleepless (Curse of the Blood Fox, #1), by Sera Ashling

SleeplessI nabbed a Copy of Sleepless, by Sera Ashling from the Amazon free list.

Description from Goodreads:
Curses are not subtle.

They are things of pain, and for a very long time Santo has been caught in one. She haunts the roads of the country of Kurdak as a mercenary, fighting back sleep every night so that she won’t have to face the horror that comes for her when she rests. Weary, with sanity almost gone and no end in sight, Santo doesn’t know who did this to her or why she is still alive.

Someone does, though. 

As the mythical Week of Colors arrives, she receives a visit from a long-time acquaintance. Traken is a sharp-tongued sorcerer with a sadistic streak, and he comes bearing an “invitation” from his master, a secretive lord who has been watching her for far too long. Santo isn’t thrilled, until another message arrives in the form of an ominous prediction: following the sorcerer will mean the answers she wants, but she’ll likely die in the process. 

That’s fine with Santo, though, because she isn’t searching for a way out… she’s searching for revenge.

Review:
Wow, I am thrilled 2015 is starting so well. I stayed up way too late last night to finish this book. Then, tired as I was, I had to check if the sequel was available before I could drag myself to bed. (It’s apparently not, but I would have bought it if it had been.)

I had very low expectations from this book, being an Amazon freeibe. But it surpassed them by some distance. Santos and Traken are a fun pair. At the start of the book they are long time acquaintances, familiar and comfortable (if wary) with one another, but not friends. That changes over the course of the book and the back and forwards banter was great.

Santo is a wonderfully strong heroine, never flailing helplessly or swooning for a man. Meanwhile, Traken is nursing a touching fragility (while still remaining badass). Plus, though there’s no sex or even much romance, seeing a man practically begging a woman to give him orders is darned sexy. Having read what I just wrote, it doesn’t sound like it would be, but in the context of the story it really is.

I’m also happy to report that this isn’t a YA book. There isn’t anything in it that would be unsuitable for younger readers, but it’s pleasantly adult for a fantasy. There is violence and surprisingly grown-up themes of healing and redemption.

The writing was fun to read and the editing was fine. I noticed a few dropped particles here or there, but that could have been a character’s speech pattern. Hard to tell.  And, though never dull, the book does seem to drag a bit in the middle. There just seems to be a lot of middle, if that makes sense. All in all, a real win in my book, made especially sweet since I really hadn’t expected as much.